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Rabzonedge @rabzonedge IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by ithasme

Bahut khoob..rabz..

Thanks harshal...😳

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Rabzonedge @rabzonedge IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by busybee..

Awesome shayari divya... 👏

Mudra I m taking ur Idea about next day..

Aaj ka Suraj laya he Naye ujaale..
Kal ke gamon ko chod kar hum aage badh chale..
Kitna fark he na kal aur aaj me..
Shayad isi tarah zindagi badal jati he agar saiyyan ka saath mile..

Thanks and excellent one Bhavita...

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BayofSarcasm @BayofSarcasm IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Rabzie Superb!! 👏👏👏Can't expresss myself so eloquently in Hindi so can use only tame words like great, brilliant.

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Rabzonedge @rabzonedge IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by SwastikAshNi

Divya,luvly one-bahaat badiya,Bhavita-good continuation,aise Shayari kaise likh leti ho!!Bahaat tough cheez hai..

Bishal Thanks..Yaar Ye batana mushkil hai kaise likh leti hoon...Kabhi shabd easily flow karte hai toh minutes bhi nahi lagte likhne mein aur kabhi saara din guzar jata hai kuchh nahi likh paate...

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