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Posted: 28 September 2012 at 5:01am | IP Logged
Very nice chapter...u r absolutely ryt...
Iam quite inspired by u after reading ths update..:-)

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Posted: 28 September 2012 at 7:00am | IP Logged
awesome updateClapClapClap
 
cont. soon
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Posted: 28 September 2012 at 9:05am | IP Logged
I am sorry for sounding so morally wrong... but is it so wrong to be selfish?
I do not judge Payal. Not yet. We forget, yet again, that selfishness exists in each one of us, it is however, a matter of choice... whether we choose to act on it... or not. I am a selfish creature. Very much so. We forget that Payal is being told from Khushi's point of view, and that there may be other qualities in Payal. Lets not jump to conclusions about Payal, just after one chapter about her.
I vote for waiting, Rafa. Waiting to see how exactly Payal turns out to be. I feel that there is more to her, than what we have just seen. Am I wrong?
 
I don't see any reason to condemn Payal, just YET. She, like other characters in this story, has her virtues and vices... just like any normal human being.
 
Am I wrong in not judging Payal as yet? Rafa? Your inputs please? 
 
What an amazing story you have here! the only story which I think about while showering... besides Godfather, Harry Potter, Phoenix Song and OF COURSE!!! Chains... :D
 
I love the way you write Rafa! I thhink I'm gonna do a facebook page for you and Anne. :P and never to forget Munchy. :D


Edited by V323 - 28 September 2012 at 9:07am
meghnas Goldie
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Posted: 28 September 2012 at 11:22am | IP Logged
loved it! Aman is yummy ;)

the way you wrote about the sins - amazing! n Shyam's realization about Arnav's indifference - fab!!
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Posted: 28 September 2012 at 3:58pm | IP Logged
fab update :)))
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Posted: 28 September 2012 at 11:21pm | IP Logged
Was wondering if you would use Puzo... Do they really need to make Payal Lavanya's girl to extend protection to her?
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Posted: 28 September 2012 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
Woah I just read this story in one go
And it was fantastic!!!!
I cannot wait to read more
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 28 September 2012 at 11:45pm | IP Logged
Awesome update!
 Payal is really disgusting!

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