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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 5:49am | IP Logged
brilliant

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Posts: 2446

Posted: 27 September 2012 at 6:25am | IP Logged
So good! I really like the way you write! :)
Kishmish IF-Rockerz
Kishmish
Kishmish

Joined: 08 February 2012
Posts: 5488

Posted: 27 September 2012 at 6:27am | IP Logged
Have some catching up to do in this story ... please bear with me Smile
vrindagupta IF-Rockerz
vrindagupta
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Posts: 6495

Posted: 27 September 2012 at 6:56am | IP Logged
khushi was right payal is selfish. i wonder why arnav even helped her.
TeleFan Goldie
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Joined: 10 November 2011
Posts: 1284

Posted: 27 September 2012 at 6:59am | IP Logged
I love the emotions you have packed into the making of Payal. Loved the update
amritab Senior Member
amritab
amritab

Joined: 10 October 2011
Posts: 478

Posted: 27 September 2012 at 7:37am | IP Logged
Loved the chapter - and the insight into Payal.  Selfishness does often take on the guise of more palatable names. 

So a question about your storytelling - chapters like these which do not originate from the Khushi-Doctor conversations, are they still meant to be read as though viewed through the Khushi prism?  or are you giving your readers a background?
emistry IF-Dazzler
emistry
emistry

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Posts: 3538

Posted: 27 September 2012 at 7:39am | IP Logged
oh wow!

i have a feeling this chapter will define khushi's path! Both her and Payal want arnav.. for different reasons... and they are going to compete for his attention...

Kushi's goal is to keep him occupied.. while hers is to protect what she has left.. whatever the cost...

Loved this chapter!!
damonzlady Goldie
damonzlady
damonzlady

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Posts: 1463

Posted: 27 September 2012 at 8:15am | IP Logged
great update!loved it!

i forgot to mention the last time,great choice for Aman n the look with the 
cigarette... priceless!

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