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PixieFlame Goldie

Joined: 01 December 2011
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Posted: 22 September 2012 at 12:56pm | IP Logged
This story is addictive, I keep wanting to know more! :D

AllSmiles86 Senior Member

Joined: 25 February 2012
Posts: 793

Posted: 22 September 2012 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by arisai

"It's a strange feeling, Doctor, when somebody commands you to do something. Even if it was something you don't particularly mind doing, when somebody tells you that you have to- you want to refuse just to piss them off."

"She ruined a lot of lives." Khushi said quietly, her voice suddenly devoid of any anger of annoyance, all the Doctor could hear was the faintest twinge of regret. "She was stupid, and incompetent, helpless and completely defenceless. But worst of all- she trusted the wrong people."

"And by the wrong people you mean?"

"Me. Doctor. She trusted me."

SCARRRYYY!!!!!!!  OMG, I love the psych memo you dropped in that conversation. Maybe that was always the case with Khushi. She knew what she was going to do and when someone told her to do the exact same thing, she flipped! And, can I say that its quite scary to read about how she loathes Payal. I wonder what she said or did to Khushi that triggered such an onslaught of mayhem and bloodshed. Khushi is as scary as the Ashley Patterson of Tell Me Your Dreams by Sidney Sheldon.
Sur_10 Goldie

Joined: 23 August 2009
Posts: 1811

Posted: 22 September 2012 at 1:29pm | IP Logged
Every time I read a chapter, I like this more.
Khushi is a very interesting character
_Tabs_ IF-Dazzler

Joined: 23 January 2012
Posts: 3909

Posted: 22 September 2012 at 1:30pm | IP Logged

lovely update
thanks for the PM
aquagal IF-Rockerz

Joined: 03 July 2012
Posts: 8588

Posted: 22 September 2012 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
Short but interesting!!
Khushi seems both innocent & wicked...
__blossom__ IF-Dazzler

Joined: 21 February 2012
Posts: 4156

Posted: 22 September 2012 at 2:01pm | IP Logged
I love this story-have I ever told you how much!??
Well I myself realized after seeing the pm...I was unusually vet happy LOL
great update!!!! So Shyam wants her to keep him away from other girls-interesting...
Payal's abused and wnt to Arnav...I can't wait for the next part???
I love the doctor!!!:D
Payal trusted like to read about this...

Ps is Shyam really gay????!???!
mirka88 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 03 July 2009
Posts: 2561

Posted: 22 September 2012 at 2:08pm | IP Logged
I just started reading this story, read all eleven parts together and WOW, What a story! And the well fleshed out, not borrowed at all. Their relationships with each other are both intriguing and fascinating as more layers are uncovered. Waiting for the next update! :)
aeyshaalim Goldie

Joined: 03 April 2012
Posts: 2329

Posted: 22 September 2012 at 2:43pm | IP Logged
Wow just wow I'm speechless

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