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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 4:41pm | IP Logged
awesome update and totally agree with you

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 5:24pm | IP Logged
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Damn!! what a chapter... So now the story starts...

I so hate this payal bitch rite now!!! she will create such a mess everyone will drown in it!! i am excited and scared how her presence will make things more difficult than it is already...
she will be with Lav which means near to khusi and it wont take payal to know wats going on between arnav and khusi... omg!!
she is so selfish she went to her ex to ask him to find out who killed her husband and on top that she is sure that He loves her and would protect her and her kids... her hero!!! that makes me sick!!

really pumped for next!!! 

update soon hun...


Edited by khusiarnav - 26 September 2012 at 7:10pm
AllSmiles86 Senior Member
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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 7:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by arisai

Selfishness goes one step beyond even this because human beings innately believe that it is our right to be selfish. We mistake it for 'instinct' and we surrender without even realising what it is we're doing. Sometimes... we even think it is the only option. "Every man for himself."
 
OMG, that man in gif is heavenly! Great, thats Aman for me now. Your description on selfishness was on point, especially with the reference to being under the disguise of instinct. How easy it is for us humans to think we are entitled to that emotion because its "EVERY MAN FOR HIMSELF". Now, I know how Payal gets into Khushi's range, I can how this woman single handedly creates the downfall of the ENTIRE mob. Damn, Arnav's indifference to Payal can only trigger this woman to take the steps to talk to Khushi. SCARED!!!!!!!!!!!


Edited by AllSmiles86 - 26 September 2012 at 7:01pm
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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 7:36pm | IP Logged
I loved this chapter! You're writing is so apt: oh humans indeed! It is amazing how much people convince themselves of to just go, feel, grab and do what they want and to hell with everyone else.
Payal is selfish, needy and pitiful. I hope Arnav really IS indifferent. I feel sorry that Payal was probably driven to confide in Khushi who in her way is equally selfish. But that's the price you pay for being an idiot. 

This story is not one I normally go to for 'winding down' at the end of the day - it's not happy or fluffy; it's real, raw and full of people who have become so twisted due to their circumstances that it's sometimes hard to see any good in them. It's a testament to your writing that I still cannot wait to read each chapter you post. I doubt it'll have a happy ending (judging from Khushi's narrative) but it's a train wreck waiting to happen that I can't walk away from! ROFL
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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 12:02am | IP Logged
Oh dear so the man NK killed was payal's hubby???

Payal shipped off to lavanya...hmm so she will meet khushi.
Will she get to know about the khushi arnav misadventure??
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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 12:21am | IP Logged
This is for the GIF Brilliant update. Turmoil and indifference all cropping in from Selfishness.
Missed Doc & Khushi's convo Embarrassed
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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 4:51am | IP Logged
wow awsuuum n thnx 4da pm dear...
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Posted: 27 September 2012 at 4:53am | IP Logged
RESRESRES
 
Ps- I LOVE YOUR ACCENT
 
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RAFA!!! I LOVE YOU. I LOVE YOU SO MUCH.
 
"Selfishness is not living as one wishes to live, it is asking others to live as one wishes to live."

 

This update was spectacularly... spectacular.

ARNAV WAS INDIFFERENT. NOW. We are coming to How Khushi met Payal. I LOVE YOU RAFA, I JUST LOVE YOU. WHATTAN UPDATE.

THE SEVEN SINS.

 

 

I LOVE PUZO. LOVELOVELOVE HIM. Now, I take the vow of the omerta, to never ever tell you that I dreamt about you, Anne, Ridz, Munchy, Navin and a cup of coffee.


 



Edited by V323 - 27 September 2012 at 5:03am

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