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amritab Senior Member

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Posts: 478

Posted: 24 September 2012 at 3:32pm | IP Logged
An unreliable narrator makes for an intriguing story.  Khushi's viewpoint on Payal - the disgust for the perceived weakness and the danger that weakness can bring - it is worthy of analysis but I will heed Khushi's advice to the Doctor and refrain from attempting to predict. 

Well written - well done!

kriti_atharv IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 September 2012 at 4:01am | IP Logged
holy crap...this is freaking getting interesting day by it very much n thnx 4da pm dear...
Arshibest Goldie

Joined: 29 March 2012
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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 1:24am | IP Logged
loved it just awesom
sahada Senior Member

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Posts: 723

Posted: 26 September 2012 at 10:40am | IP Logged
Wacko Just came across Tainted.. couple of hrs bck... and now I have the bloody chills run down my spine too... What is this girl Khushiii I love her BUT Spoooky ths !! 
You're en exceptionally powerful & talented writer Star And Khushi's mysterious character is so beautifully sketched n unfolded in each chpt!!
indeedisa Groupbie

Joined: 30 March 2012
Posts: 195

Posted: 26 September 2012 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
Wow. Holy flipping god wow. Like seriously. Wow.
I'm not even joking when I say, I need this to be a movie or something. This would be an absolutely perfect plot for a movie.
I absolutely love your take on Arnav and Khushi's story. But I am kinda confused but I quite like that because I know there is still more to come. And I also know that I'm supposed to be.
Wow, the way you've described their criminal lifestyle and how it's had an effect on their minds is just simple amazing. It's always really interesting for me personally to find out about every single person in a plot that's important because I am just naturally curious like that. Aman intrigues me because of his past and his deeds
Please please update soon. This is just one hell of a story.
Lots of love
Celiza xox

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arisai Goldie

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 4:23pm | IP Logged

Edited by arisai - 20 July 2013 at 12:25pm

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infiresmayn Senior Member

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 4:26pm | IP Logged




Edited by MsIPKKNDManic - 26 September 2012 at 4:27pm
ayshaomar IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 26 September 2012 at 4:41pm | IP Logged
great chapter
so it clearly shows why khushi kept calling her selfish, she clearly proved it in this chapter, now as the love of her life is dead, she wanted to go back to her ex and make him protect her because he loves her, what a woman

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