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angeldream14 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 20 September 2012 at 5:49pm | IP Logged

daydreamerr Senior Member

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Posted: 22 September 2012 at 2:42am | IP Logged
Their friendship was so well depicted. Could tell it runs reaaally deep. I loved seeing a different side to both of them, it was fab. Thanks for the PM. :)
arisai Goldie

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Posted: 22 September 2012 at 11:09am | IP Logged


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khusiarnav Goldie

Joined: 21 April 2012
Posts: 1761

Posted: 22 September 2012 at 11:12am | IP Logged
Yayyy me first!!! Big smile

Mind blowing update... Intriguing as always!!

Khusi.. well what can say... she is a unsolved mystery!! with every update m more fascinated and drawn to her... She is naive and innocent almost stupid in the story, she is telling to doctor... but when she comes back to reality... oh Man that gives me goosebumps!! She is COLD!!!

"I killed a lot of people, Doctor. You know that. A great deal more than the police know and more than they ever will know. But most of the time, it was nothing personal. It was justbusiness. But Payal? I killed her to do the world a favour." Khushi grimaced and looked away. 
- That was so unexpected... killed a  lot of people!!! oh my...  killing payal was a favor to world... hhhmmm... we shall see, wont we???

And the last para was amazing... payal trusted wrong person and that was Khusi herself... i am so into this story!! u have got me hooked with your FFs... seriously dude You are amazing... just outstanding!!!

Keep up!! Clap Thumbs Up

update soon...

Edited by khusiarnav - 22 September 2012 at 11:32am
reflorated IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 September 2012 at 11:29am | IP Logged
OOHHHOOHHH<3 I got a PM before anybody else! PERSONALIZED! (Take that, stalkers)
alright... woman... first with those amazing quotes, that almost always remind me of great books I almost never find time to read AGAIN... you just rouse the librarian in me, LOL! Or should I say the matilda in me?
As for this update... First up... KHUSHI <3
I can feel the psychologist's confusion mount up on me. that is all I am gonna say, for now. Don't worry... I'll probably come back later, when my thoughts are more organised. Best of luck for uni.

Edited by V323 - 22 September 2012 at 11:37am
PersieV IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 September 2012 at 11:34am | IP Logged

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damonzlady Goldie

Joined: 29 April 2012
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Posted: 22 September 2012 at 11:36am | IP Logged
"I killed a lot of people, Doctor. You know that. A great deal more
 than the police know and more than they ever will know. But most 
of the time, it was nothing personal. It was just business. But Payal? 
I killed her to do the world a favour." Khushi grimaced and looked away.

i love all of your updates!loved this update!it just keeps getting more and
more interesting!
pink.lotus Goldie

Joined: 04 March 2012
Posts: 2362

Posted: 22 September 2012 at 11:37am | IP Logged
payal rodriguez? wow.
I love the way shyam reacts to khushi's escapades.
and aman really bought the cheapest food and filled the fridge? is he, like, mental?
i like how khushi explained the feeling of being commanded by someone who really has no claim over you.

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