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maddieee IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 17 September 2012 at 9:16pm | IP Logged
lovely...  i loved the way lavanya explained shyam's expressions... poor lavanya,yet she is so strong... supa dupa update

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Posted: 18 September 2012 at 11:25am | IP Logged
I got the link from a friend and so far read the first two chapters and I must say the plot is gripping and I love your style very bold and very descriptive yet to the point. Loved this so far will be back to read more
stunning.ayesha IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 18 September 2012 at 5:38pm | IP Logged
Update soon
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Posted: 18 September 2012 at 9:02pm | IP Logged
Ok so finished it up to now and I am all in. I find this Khushi ' interesting' and I mean it not in a banal way. Somehow your story and characterization reminds me of fight club like you mentioned, girl interrupted, silence of the lambs and bronte. I think the quotes you use are very telling And quite fascinating.

I loved what I read so far and I will say this is one of the most interesting FF's I have read recently coz it appeals to my intellect the way it's plotted.

Great stuff
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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 12:05am | IP Logged
i think im going to need a lot of courage to read this..TongueTongue

chapter 1: i thought arnav was the doctor specially when khushi mentioned shantivan. and i thought she might be there for regular appointment but u really surprised me by revealing that she was in prisonShockedShocked

chapter 2: arnav and payal??? ok i was NOT expecting this!Tongue

chapter 3: i liked how u portrayed NK's character and the bond which he shared with arnav. he was able to make arnav singh raizada apologize!! wowClapClap

going to comment more after reading..

chapter 4: Nk and khushi?? hmmmTongueTongue

chapter 5: Akash the leader??ShockedShocked u gave me a big shockLOLLOL

chapter 6: i felt so sorry for aman..being in this hell since he was nine. so he told everyone about payal's betrayal. interesting. i think his character will be very important in future.

chapter 7: khushi killed payal???ShockedShocked i think u have sworn to give mini heart attacks to ur readers every time Big smileBig smile

chapter 8: ok i was a bit confused in this chapter..from what i figured out in chap 5 akash was thier leader and also a policeman. and from this chapter i figured out that payal married akashConfusedConfused and why is NK scared??

chapter 9: khushi was willing to do this for NK?? but then she admitted that she was already in love with arnav at that point..she is one confused soul but i loved how you portrayed her emotionsSmile

chapter 10: shyamujan and volcanoji?? hahahaLOLLOL i loved how you described thier relationship..and i dont understand shyam;s reaction to khushi sleeping with arnav. maybe he thinks this will bring complications..

pheww!! do you know this is the longest comment i have made and all the credit goes to you and ur FFClapClap
i would really really like to read more so plz give me a pm when u update nextSmile


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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 8:26am | IP Logged
this story just gets more interesting every time!
blue-eye Goldie
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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 12:37pm | IP Logged
Great update
purplelove Goldie
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Posted: 20 September 2012 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
Clap  Really enjoyed reading all the updates.

Chapter 6:
The past which has shaped Aman was brilliantly written. 

Chapter 7:
Some lines a really liked:

That one word was enough. 

Khushi didn't speak the language of men- especially not that shared by Brothers in the Group- but she knew that whatever NK had conveyed to Arnav through that one word, his own name, was enough.

He wouldn't hurt her.

The corner of the Doctor's mouth twitched slightly as he steered the conversation back to point. "So you actually met Payal?"

"Of course. You can't kill someone you haven't met, Doctor."

Last line a brilliant cliffhanger for your readers.  Overall enjoyed the whole update.

Chapter 8:

Your Khushi's mind is fascinating.

Chapter 9:

These lines made me laugh out loud.

"You're a fan of making statements that kind of sound like questions, aren't you Doctor?"

"And you're a fan of asking questions with pretty obvious answers, aren't you Khushi?"


Chapter 10:

"I'm a very unreliable narrator, Doctor... Be careful."  Wonderfully written.  Since you are the author what does this say about you. Wink  This reader thanks you for the warning.


Chapter 11:

Nice glimpse into Lava and Shamujaan.





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