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PixieFlame Goldie

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 12:28pm | IP Logged

pink.lotus Goldie

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
shyam and lavanya. now there's a pair made somewhere far  from earth!

that was one blade-balancing chapter.. and i loved every word and comma in it.

mistyrains IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
Khushi's character is enigmatic, I think, she has so many layers, each more evocative, than the previous. Terrific chapter.
vasu20 Newbie

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 1:10pm | IP Logged
wowww...beautiful story...cant wait 2 read more...:))))
ayshaomar IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 5:29pm | IP Logged
that did leave me a tad confused but im sure that will clear up in the next chapter
so it was shyaam who rescued lavanya and kinda bought her into this world to survive
and khushi slept with arnav which we knew she was gonna but i wonder why shyaam flinched
and i wonder if this akaash has a reason as to why he kept khushi alive as he sounds heartless who wud kill anyone on the spot
drunkiiebabe IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 6:22pm | IP Logged
wow awesome update
thanks for the pm
sohara IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 7:07pm | IP Logged
Amazing update.
I'm feeling so sad for Lavanya. Her past is really pathetic.But Shyam helped her from that day till now. So she shares a great bond with him. It seems like she is a mature mid-aged woman here.Coz when she was 15 she met 8 year old.Arnav.
So khushi slept with Arnav. But why she is so scared. Did she already committed the murder?
waiting for the next update.

Edited by sohara - 16 September 2012 at 7:08pm
AllSmiles86 Senior Member

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 8:13pm | IP Logged
"So I see you have your constipated face on." she exhaled a cloud of smoke before settling into the seat adjacent to him, crossing her legs neatly at the ankle. "Do you need a laxative or is this not just a social call?"
You know how many times I have laughed whenever Shyam from the show has the constipated look, especially when he hugs Anjali! BAHAHAHAHAHA. Perfect.

"All attempts at blocking forgotten, just trying to curl into herself and keep the target as small as possible." The most primitive urge humans have against any violence. Just keep the target as small and coiled as possible. Sigh!

"She needed to survive" Darwin would have been proud of you!

"Suddenly realising that you not only run these peoples' lives, but are actually responsible for them? I know, hon." AAAHHH, the motto of Organized Crime! Hail Shyam and Lava!

Edited by AllSmiles86 - 16 September 2012 at 8:16pm

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