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damonzlady Goldie
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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 3:31am | IP Logged
Shyam and Lavanya are cute!loved the update!Smile

preetihere IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 3:36am | IP Logged
Lavanya and Shyam  - to think such friendship would last in a dog eat dog world that is especially theirs!
I wanted to hear more of their banter and easy talk , wanted to hear more of their first meet .
Khushi came running to tell Lavanya what she did? i guess i have to wait and see why.

aquagal IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 4:16am | IP Logged
Seriously the friendship of Shyam & Lavanya is adorable here... Loved it :)
HansaN IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 4:17am | IP Logged
Nice
NestleToulouse IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 6:05am | IP Logged
Loved the update !! Thanks for the PM dear Hug
nabnab Senior Member
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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 7:15am | IP Logged
Hey,

I loved the chapter! Shyam and Lavanya's 'banter' was hilarious- I love their relationship in spite of what they each have to do in this world. The references to twitching and constipated faces had me in stitches.

Lavanya's story was painful to read...especially the part at the end of her assault where she is beaten up and span on. You did a brilliant job of writing it.

Shyam helping her out shows the beginnings of this wonderful relationship and Arnav as a kid was also quite funny.

The plot is thickening, and I loved how you show just how scary and dangerous Shyam can be when he asks Khushi who the hell she is as a sharp and sudden contrast to the lightheartedness with Lavanya.

I love how you can slip in your wonderful sense of humour into even this FF which is dark and dangerous to say the least.

Thanks for the PM and the double update with Cafe too:)

Anaya xxx
tanurocks IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 7:22am | IP Logged
what a brilliant update...
loved la-shyam's story...sometimes u find bad beast in this so called good world and good people among the bad world...
Sur_10 Goldie
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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 7:39am | IP Logged
The way they greeted each other was pretty cool :D
Rather unexptected side of the story

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