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Posted: 17 September 2012 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
Great update Shyam and Lavanya's relationship is great but wonder why Khushi is already upset about sleeping with Arnav

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Posted: 17 September 2012 at 1:20pm | IP Logged
snake and la wow that is just wow the relationship is different and khushi panic because she slept with arnav and snake reaction thanks for the pm awesome update
 



Edited by dumas - 17 September 2012 at 1:20pm
oh.petite.one Goldie
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Posted: 17 September 2012 at 4:28pm | IP Logged
just caught up with all the updates and they're fab :)))
..Shweta.. IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 17 September 2012 at 6:00pm | IP Logged

I was feeling a bit guilty about not reading much anymore so instead of a book, I turned to IF and one of your FFs and I heard you talk about Tainted here and there in your audio clip and I picked this one up first 'cause I usually like lighthearted stuff like You've Got Mail (which I read bits and pieces of cause I'm a lazy being sorry!) and Cafe du Soleil (which I haven't read just know it's lighthearted) but I recently just had this growing interest in completely deranged situations with messed up characters aka stuff that's dark in a way? Idk but basically not a typical Contemp. Romance.

 
Anyways...
 
I'm not going to waste your time telling you what an exceptional writer you are and how beautifully this story was written and how you kept the tone and flow of the text constant because geniuses have better things to do then read my comments (lol!).
 
I have only read the first chapter and... WOW.
 
I really can't read many FF's now a days cause I get busy and/or have trouble commiting to an ongoing one and/or am too tired to read a 50 chaptered completed FF but I am really hooked onto this one.
 
I am super excited now to read the next part! I'm gonna savor these parts like one would chocolate whilst completing homework. Ex. I will eat one Ferrero Rocher upon completing one worksheet.
(Yes I related each update to a Ferrero Rocher!)
(Speaking of Ferrero Rochers, now I'm craving one and I don't have one! Asdkajsdlkgjhg!!!!)
(Need. Chocolate. Now.)
 
Anyways, I LOOOVE the messed up Khushi. She seems to have been wounded with things that go beyond one's understanding to have resulted her into being such a sarcastic, mocking, bold woman but that I just got out of the first update my thoughts about her and words I would use to describe her are subject to change!
 
Arisai, I don't even know what to say to you anymore. I phucking love thou (aka Ehhh Sexayyy Laaadayyy!)!! <3 You are brilliant in every way! Muah!
 
-Shwetz
 
PS. Your voice is like... it's like... it's like beautiful and your accent is like... *ponders* um... I can't seem to find the right words... SEXAY LIKE BARUN SOBTI POSING SHIRTLESS (keepin it PG).
 
Have I creeped you out?
 
 
No but like really, I am not as creepy as you may conclude out of this wacked out comment.
 
Oh and one more thing that I'd like to just mention here cause it's really hard to scrap GIFs.
 
I won Runner Up FF for Femme Fatale?
 
WHAT?
 
 
YOU (The almighty ARISAI!) awarded it to me?
 
DOUBLE SPITTAKE.
 
 
ARISAI!!! You have no idea how happy you've made a certain baby. (Yes I'm 7 months old)
 
 
 
You have NO idea how much it meant to me coming from you! And you said it had you hooked??!?!
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Ok I think that's enough but I love you Arisai!! *Hugs*
And I really just don't know what to say, I think the GIFs speak for themselves (literally).
 
Muah!
 
And I am hoping crazy flying monkeys are present in this story somewhere. JK.
 
(Woah that was a looong PS)
 
PPS. I love you smart cookie. And specially for you,
 
OPPA GANGNAM STYLE

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Posted: 17 September 2012 at 9:16pm | IP Logged
lovely...  i loved the way lavanya explained shyam's expressions... poor lavanya,yet she is so strong... supa dupa update
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Posted: 18 September 2012 at 11:25am | IP Logged
I got the link from a friend and so far read the first two chapters and I must say the plot is gripping and I love your style very bold and very descriptive yet to the point. Loved this so far will be back to read more
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Posted: 18 September 2012 at 9:02pm | IP Logged
Ok so finished it up to now and I am all in. I find this Khushi ' interesting' and I mean it not in a banal way. Somehow your story and characterization reminds me of fight club like you mentioned, girl interrupted, silence of the lambs and bronte. I think the quotes you use are very telling And quite fascinating.

I loved what I read so far and I will say this is one of the most interesting FF's I have read recently coz it appeals to my intellect the way it's plotted.

Great stuff
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Posted: 19 September 2012 at 12:05am | IP Logged
i think im going to need a lot of courage to read this..TongueTongue

chapter 1: i thought arnav was the doctor specially when khushi mentioned shantivan. and i thought she might be there for regular appointment but u really surprised me by revealing that she was in prisonShockedShocked

chapter 2: arnav and payal??? ok i was NOT expecting this!Tongue

chapter 3: i liked how u portrayed NK's character and the bond which he shared with arnav. he was able to make arnav singh raizada apologize!! wowClapClap

going to comment more after reading..

chapter 4: Nk and khushi?? hmmmTongueTongue

chapter 5: Akash the leader??ShockedShocked u gave me a big shockLOLLOL

chapter 6: i felt so sorry for aman..being in this hell since he was nine. so he told everyone about payal's betrayal. interesting. i think his character will be very important in future.

chapter 7: khushi killed payal???ShockedShocked i think u have sworn to give mini heart attacks to ur readers every time Big smileBig smile

chapter 8: ok i was a bit confused in this chapter..from what i figured out in chap 5 akash was thier leader and also a policeman. and from this chapter i figured out that payal married akashConfusedConfused and why is NK scared??

chapter 9: khushi was willing to do this for NK?? but then she admitted that she was already in love with arnav at that point..she is one confused soul but i loved how you portrayed her emotionsSmile

chapter 10: shyamujan and volcanoji?? hahahaLOLLOL i loved how you described thier relationship..and i dont understand shyam;s reaction to khushi sleeping with arnav. maybe he thinks this will bring complications..

pheww!! do you know this is the longest comment i have made and all the credit goes to you and ur FFClapClap
i would really really like to read more so plz give me a pm when u update nextSmile


Edited by Sana_malik - 19 September 2012 at 1:05am

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