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daydreamerr Senior Member
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Joined: 17 February 2012
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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 4:06pm | IP Logged
I can't get over this story!! It just gets better and better omg!
Khushi's quiet resolve speaks volumes and I could sense Arnav's surprise at her not running for the hills like he expected. I love how she's so loyal to everything thy she's learnt off Lavanya, it's like she's made Lavanya her idol en though she doesn't acknowledge it.
Her and the doctor are fabulous, love how she speaks to him as if he's a less competent acquaintance or something.
Awesome update and now I'm really intrigued by this book 'Lolita', will deffo give it a read. Thanks a lot! :)

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 4:20pm | IP Logged
Khushis character is so complex but i do love it, everything she says is never straightforward and it always keeps u guessing
and such a vast difference between Past Khushi and Present Khushi, im guessing all her dark memories of the past is the reason to the change
and the switch between the past and the present, especially in this one with the counting was great

bless the doctor, surprise he hasnt had a little heartattack with all the info she is giving him
drunkiiebabe IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 4:42pm | IP Logged
awesome update arnav took her up on her offer n he gave her a choice n the whole counting down khushi character is so complex but love her n aman running in with a gun n pointed it to khushi asking "do i shoot"  loved the update thanks for the pm
Crinklez. Senior Member
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Posts: 890

Posted: 05 September 2012 at 6:05pm | IP Logged
Awesome.
This is already one of my favourite stories.
Love the way you write and this story is just sooo interesting and i love this version of Khushi.
My favourite part was Aman running in with the gun asking if he should shootLOL
adev Senior Member
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Joined: 31 August 2007
Posts: 406

Posted: 05 September 2012 at 7:21pm | IP Logged
OMG you are an amazing writer!! Too bad we get it only in installments! :(
simi888 Groupbie
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Joined: 16 December 2011
Posts: 116

Posted: 05 September 2012 at 8:46pm | IP Logged

just recently came across this ff and do i feel lucky for that!

such a different concept and beautifully intense chapters which just capture your imagination from the first word. I have read all 9 chapters in one sitting and what a rollercoaster of emotions that has been!
 
i just like khushi wanted her to run from that room and leave arnav behind but the other part of my was screaming at her to stay. such is your writing that we share each emotion so closely with your characters.  
 
You have such an amazing talent for writing, cant wait to read more!
 
sam
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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 9:01pm | IP Logged
Very interesting... But i m very confused why nd how she land up here why she needs a doctor???? She was just an dancer...
Curiousmind Senior Member
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Joined: 07 March 2012
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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 10:52pm | IP Logged
Finally an update and what an update! I love your Khushi because I can't decide if I should like her or not. Arnav is much easier to understand but Khushi is one tough nutcase. Eagerly waiting for your next update.

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