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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 6:10am | IP Logged
Khushi almost reminds me Regina Mills from Once upon a time. Not the evil quotient,the complexity that describes both the character.

I don't feel much for this girl. Somehow I turn on the automan mode when reading the chapters so I can be impartial ans say just how good job you are doing. I especially the the use of countdown and switching over to the present almost immediately.




Edited by peppygeek - 05 September 2012 at 6:10am

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 6:26am | IP Logged
What?? arnav took her up on her offer. well he did offer her to run but she stood her ground.
I found it humourous the way aman came running and pointed a gun at khushi. what did he think khushi was upto???
Khushi's life is getting more and morem dark. She said in one of her sentence that she maybe was in love with arnav then...does that he mean in the near future she will fall for arnav n forget NK. Yipee

Do update soon...\ n does this mean you will update the other twoo ff also??
arisai Goldie
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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 6:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by V323

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Rafa!!!
 
First things first- Lolilta. I am in absolute love with that book. It was a profoundly eye opening read, and it made me want to open up to new ideas.
 
If my opinion counts... after Lolita's mother dies, Humbert and Lolita had no blood relation. They were free to do as they chose. And I agree. Humbert can hardly be called a reliable narrator. And somehow, the book didn't seem too scandalous to me. And to boot off, the book was funny.
 
Second thing... I'm second. LOL 
 
This was another beautiful chapter Rafa! WOW!! Khushi... the other day... I was showering and thinking about when you'd update next.
 
Khushi is such a complicated character. I can feel the doctor's desperation to unravel her growing on me. Like... I read one chapter and then I'm like... what next! what next! WHAT NEXT??///  Dude. The games you play with my heart! I'll die.
 
Are you back from Korea, just btw?
 
-V
 

Oh dear- you have engaged me in a talk about literature. Prepare to suffer the consequences woman ;)

I expected what everyone does before they actually read the book, to hate Humbert and pity Lolita- but Lolita was FAR more devious and twisted a character than I thought she'd be and at times, it got to the point where I actually pitied Humbert how easily he was being manipulated by his little nymphet. Hah yes, it was funny- except ngl, my A* in GCSE French was clearly not down to long-term memory as I had to look up a lot of the random French in it.  I thought the relationship was uncomfortable just because she was 12, I'm fine with bigger age gaps provided both of the people involved are of age. And I feel like, because Humbert acknowledges that what he does is wrong- you kind of... I don't know, you don't forgive him or sympathise- but you understand him. And that's kind of what I feel is the most disturbing aspect of the book.

It's different to the feeling of reading something like Suskind's Perfume when you hate the character but read on because his desperation and justification of what he does is fascinating, despite the fact that you yourself don't understand at all.

Haha thanks. I didn't update this while I was in Korea because I just didn't have the time and also Svengali was eating away at my head too much. LOL Yes indeed I am back- after what ended up being 43 hours of travelling (Jeju to Gimpo, Gimpo to Incheon, Incheon to Abu Dhabi, Abu Dhabi to Heathrow, Heathrow to Cambridge, Cambridge to Hull- with up to six hour waits in between) I have returned.  

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 6:35am | IP Logged
Oh an update!

Edit:
My heart is beating in my mouth , i thought she would RUN! Phew!
Already in love with ASR and didn't know it?  hmmm so there is going to be a torrid love story after this! This Khushi is so complicated...she walks into Lavanya's world by choice, runs away from Arnav at first then offers herself...oh my ! What next?!


ps: hope u enjoyed ur hols!
I have bookmarked all the stories to read up someday ...is it too complex the books u quote from coz i may not be able to understand...i have read Jane Eyre and Count of Monte Cristo though!


Edited by preetihere - 05 September 2012 at 6:55am
arisai Goldie
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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 6:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by peppygeek

Khushi almost reminds me Regina Mills from Once upon a time. Not the evil quotient,the complexity that describes both the character.

I don't feel much for this girl. Somehow I turn on the automan mode when reading the chapters so I can be impartial ans say just how good job you are doing. I especially the the use of countdown and switching over to the present almost immediately.



I haven't seen Once Upon A Time (I'm guessing you're talking about the show) but my friend has and she's in love with it. She says the characters are really interesting so I guess I'll take that as a compliment? If it isn't one, I'll STILL take it as a compliment because that's just how I roll LOL

Thank you for persisting despite the fact that Khushi isn't (yet) a sympathetic character at all. I like switching back to present day Khushi because she's a lot more jaded and flip than past-Khushi who is, in a sense, more insane than the one who is being forced to see a federal psychiatrist. She'll change as she reveals more to the Doctor and is forced to relive her darkest moments through these sessions. I don't know if you'll grow to like her or not, but I hope she'll definitely make you feel something. 

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 6:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by serialmaniac

What?? arnav took her up on her offer. well he did offer her to run but she stood her ground.
I found it humourous the way aman came running and pointed a gun at khushi. what did he think khushi was upto???
Khushi's life is getting more and morem dark. She said in one of her sentence that she maybe was in love with arnav then...does that he mean in the near future she will fall for arnav n forget NK. Yipee

Do update soon...\ n does this mean you will update the other twoo ff also??

He did indeed ;) But then, for the story to progress- would you really expect anything else? LOL

Haha, oh Aman. I do like him. I think someone said once that all the other characters in my stories would be jealous of how much attention I pay to Aman- he's kind of a cameo character at the minute but I have big things planned for him in the future. DEAR LORD THIS STORY IS SO TWISTED IT'S PRACTICALLY A BITTER JALEBI.

Ohh, the NK-Khushi-Arnav story is complicated. Hopefully you'll enjoy it. But yes, she does fall in love with Arnav eventually. I've already revealed that in the chapter so there's no harm in clarifying. It's the how that I hope will be interesting. 

Indeed I will, as I'm back from Korea and have a little time before Uni starts :)
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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 6:46am | IP Logged
wow, awesome update. can't believe arnav accepted her offer n even gave her a chance to run. i wonder in near future khushi might forget nk n fall for arnav
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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 6:51am | IP Logged
Oh wow loved the update sweetie !!StarHugWow he actually accepted her offer ??Unbelievable *In ASR's way of sayingLOL* Waiting to see what happens next !! Thank you for the PM dear Embarrassed

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