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GayuArnav IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 8:48am | IP Logged
That was a fabulous Update Rafa!
I was like "what the hell!! Khushi is totally stupid" Yes she was. Thinking that she is  Doing something for NK and sleeping with Arnav? It all seems humorous for me!  LOL 
Actually i was happy when Arnav tried to reason that what she is doing is wrong by pointing out their age difference. At least he has that thinking rather than just accepting the offer and f**king her! He is at no fault because he did gave her an option of running but  Khushi was adamant. 
And khushi said she had fallen in love with Arnav! Awww yeah! *Does a happy dance* 
And Khushi is damn complicated man! I can totally relate to the doctor's feelings and how desperate he is to know what kind of woman Khushi is! And With every chapter i feel like there is so much to her.It is like exploring her in every update! 
I loved it! :) 

arisai Goldie

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 8:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by V323

I haven't read intoxicated yet. Come to think of it... I have only read YOU'VE GOT MAIL, TAINTED, CAFE DU SOLEIL and SVENGALI!
Gimme the link to your index? I'll get to everything one by one!
PS- when is Khushi going to turn her saag raat to sUHaag raat?

I think you'll like it.

It's by far my own personal favourite and Aman in it is my favourite character of every single one I've written. Or possibly Yamir- but Yamir's personality is based on my own so saying he's my favourite may make me a bit of an egomaniac. Also he only seriously appears in the last chapter so it's kind of weird to make him my favourite LOL

Hope you enjoy them :)

P.S. Erm, I'm not sure? When enough people complain that it hasn't been updated in about a year for me to feel guilted into it? :') Though I am getting those for NQPH and lack of inspiration is so strong I literally cannot overcome it and write chapter three.

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reflorated IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 9:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arisai

Originally posted by V323

From one booklover to anotherStar
I know right?
I don't have french as an add on subject... so that is when my cousins came to rescue!LOL
Yep. When I first heard about it... I was like bloody hell!! That mother f**king sonofabitch!
But as I read the story, I found I could... you know... understand him. Not forgive him. Maybe not even ever allow sympathy to creep into my heart for him... because the way I see it... Humbert was as much to blame as Lolita. In a way. I didn't HATE Humbert. But no... his desperation to soothe his conscience was indeed... disturbing. Very disturbing.
I know what you mean. Its like picking off a particularly HUGE scab, if you can relate. Like... you want to peel it off, and you do peel it off, but when you do it HURTS.  
ooohhh Svengali!! I... I... I LOVE IT!!! Like OHMAYYGOSH!!! What an absolutely brilliant concept. What I find intriguing is that in both Tainted and Svengali, Khushi is shown as an innocent girl, until the big bad world gets her. And then she changes. For better or for worse, that is for you to write and for me to readWink
I'm guessing you had a great trip?

I've been trying to keep up with my fiction reading in between all the medical books I'm reading now (though a lot of Doctors write hilariously- Confessions of a GP cracks me up every few pages and I'm currently ploughing through The Emperor of All Maladies- sounds a little Mulan, is in fact about the fight against cancer). I LERRVV BEERRKSS (if that made sense to you PLUS ONE, if it didn't, you're a normal human being and have not heard of the ERMAGERD I LERV BERKS/ GERSBERMPS meme) LOL

Yeah. I find that I really like all my characters, regardless of how messed up and just plain twisted they are (ngl though, I genuinely despised Shyam from Intoxicated because he wasn't a grey character- he was all black...) because it makes them more interesting for me to write. I love getting inside their heads- though as they are all figments of my imagination- not entirely sure what this says about me.

I'm glad you enjoy my writing. Genuinely- whenever people compliment me on it, I'm at a bit of a loss for words. Svengali is planned out in my head entirely- I know exactly where it's going, but getting the images in my head into words is proving harder than I thought as it's such a precarious topic I have to be careful. Tainted has certain key turning points that I want to reveal straight away but know I need to pace it. Something I've known since Chapter Two probably won't be revealed to readers until near the end and it's KILLING ME AND I WANT TO TELL SOMEBODY BUT I CAN'T LOL

My trip was BEYOND incredible. I'm so sad it's over. Seriously, if you ever get the chance- DEFINITELY go. It's very couple-friendly btw. :') Relationships are a massive deal there.
I javen't hear of confessions of a GP... and BERRRKKKSS... I guess it makes me a normal human?
I know what you mean. I'm writing a story on the forum Glass... which is basically MY spin off after the Shyam exposure...and ohmayygoodd!! It is SO difficult trying to write what is on your head! Like shit scary. Like all these thoughts, they are tango-ing away and you're like... TANGO ON THE DAMN LAPTOP, lol!
I know what you mean. In Glass, Shyam has the oedipus complex.. (though how it is related to Khushi.. that is too complicated to explain right now) and sometimes, I catch myself trying to think like him, so that I can make the update more... shall we call it true to the character?
I like all my characters too. Because yeah, I kind of accepted that they are humans... and humans have there flaws and strengths. You can;t make a character all superman, JUST because. :D
You're not wierd. Because I try to think like my characters... and I'm vain enough to think I am not wierd.
You do medical? OHMAYYGOSH!! you are brave. Can't stand blood... I can read it, write about it... but when I see it... RUN FOREST RUN!! LOL
Korea sounds fun. Couples only?? #rushes off to dial on her phone.
.nirvana. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 9:35am | IP Logged
wow kushi is in love with arnav...
so they finally did it!!!
loved it...cant wait for next...
PersieV IF-Rockerz

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arhifrvr Senior Member

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 9:39am | IP Logged
ohkayyy... This definitely puts my mind to rest... Khushi did certainly fall for arnav atleast in the I future... =D
ChocoDamon Senior Member

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 10:04am | IP Logged
wow... that was simply "wow"...
sorry for my lack of more proficient vocabulary... but you are one heck of a writer... absolutely amazing!!! 
snoopy84 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 05 September 2012 at 10:07am | IP Logged
Great update seems like Khushi is getting more deeper by each chapter. Love how clever she is and how she converses with the doctor.
Also i have now ordered Lolita and will give it a read as im intrigued by your mention of it.

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