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arisai Goldie
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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 9:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aveiro

First!!

Stalking skills are awesome :D

Edit

Wow! From this update I'm hating Payal so much!! Why is she occupying Arnav's mind for?

Well anyways, Khushi didn't want to stay with Arnav but he promised he wouldn't touch her ROFL! 

Ahhh he finds cute me likey the song choice!

He told her to go and sit with Aman? 

WHAT THE HELL DID PAYAL DO?? I'M HATING HER BARE LOADS. 

STUPID HO. 

PEACE OUT. 

Mrs Gemili. ;)

I hate Payal so much man. 
And she's my own character.
I had more sympathy for Shyam in Intoxicated than Payal in this.

Khushi's going to kill her though so all is well. :')


YO LIYA DID YOU NOT READ CHAPTER SIX? She was working with the police to bring the Group down. 

Speaking of not reading- I'm literally JUST about to go and edit those RESes you posted on Intoxicated LOL

Pfft Mrs Gimli ;)

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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 9:17am | IP Logged
Awesome update.. So khushi killed Payal that is very interesting.. Poor Arnav.. He is so much in love with Payal.. It is hard when the one you love betrays you, she is the reason you are in jail for 10 years and she is married happily to someone else..

Love sarcastic khushi
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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 9:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arisai

Originally posted by Aveiro

First!!

Stalking skills are awesome :D

Edit

Wow! From this update I'm hating Payal so much!! Why is she occupying Arnav's mind for?

Well anyways, Khushi didn't want to stay with Arnav but he promised he wouldn't touch her ROFL! 

Ahhh he finds cute me likey the song choice!

He told her to go and sit with Aman? 

WHAT THE HELL DID PAYAL DO?? I'M HATING HER BARE LOADS. 

STUPID HO. 

PEACE OUT. 

Mrs Gemili. ;)

I hate Payal so much man. 
And she's my own character.
I had more sympathy for Shyam in Intoxicated than Payal in this.

Khushi's going to kill her though so all is well. :')


YO LIYA DID YOU NOT READ CHAPTER SIX? She was working with the police to bring the Group down. 

Speaking of not reading- I'm literally JUST about to go and edit those RESes you posted on Intoxicated LOL

Pfft Mrs Gimli ;)

I DON'T THINK I READ CHAPTER SIX MAYBE BECAUSE I WASN'T FIRST!!! -_- 

LMAO! Yeah you better go unres now!! Or I will throw some Fudge Cake at you"" 

Mrs Gemili! Not MRs GIMLI!! Ruining the perfect image.
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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 9:19am | IP Logged
Ok, so I'm 3rd one to comment... This will do for now... Coz this is big improvement from previous attempts...lol... Now, on to more important stuff...the update was eventful. And awesome... So Khushi killed Payal the dishwater... What happened to Arnav, NK, Aman, Shyam, etc. then?   *Tsk... Patience, HGL. Patience* And you internet-love me? Rofl... (i'm using my phone to comment right now, so can't use emoticons and my comment looks like a complete mess... Will properly edit when I'll be using my laptop)

Edited by Happy-go-lucky - 09 August 2012 at 9:46am
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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 9:19am | IP Logged
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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 9:47am | IP Logged
wow i loved your update...finally a arshi scene ... now lets see khushi did trust NK a lot...hes a criminal like the others the psyciatrist was right how cud she?? then came lets take her to arnav...didnt nk know that these two share a bad past?? n if aman dear was downstairs cudnt nk take her to him...

next the arshi scene so the pillow on the lap signifies that he is atracted to her physically...but he still hast forgotten payal...

well khushi killed payal thats y she is in jail...yess so arnav maybe alive...good so wen she gets out of prison they will be reunited...however i have a feeling that payal's murder has another story to it...

plz update soon i love your ff...its so mysterious

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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 9:49am | IP Logged
I never been excited to read about how someone died, but man I am looking forward to how Payal is murdered. Love the song, it's a typical song that an entertainer like Kushi would dance to. I find these old songs more fun to watch being danced to than the newer item songs... : ) 
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Posted: 09 August 2012 at 9:54am | IP Logged
W*F!!
Khusi killed Payal!!!!! omg that was some new info there...


woaahhh worth the wait!!!!

u are amazing...

great update dearr...
was waiting for so long!!!

update soon... its getting more n more intriguing...

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