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summaiyasayed IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 7:24pm | IP Logged
awesome updt

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Kiely IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 7:30pm | IP Logged
nice concept

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darkninja Senior Member
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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 9:04pm | IP Logged
Sounds awesome and kinda reminds of movie watched called suckerpunch

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wildandsweet Goldie
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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 9:14pm | IP Logged
interesting
waiting to read more

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aeyshaalim Goldie
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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 9:47pm | IP Logged
Hmm u r one talented writer .
Its a very interesting start
Curious to know what happens next
Btw who's d doc

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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 10:55pm | IP Logged
Wow.
Some story you've started.
brilliant vocabulary and language.
Love how you've penned Khushi's character and the description she gives- amazing.
please update soon.

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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
Woah. A psychoanalysis background with Khushi as the patient!

Very well written and very interesting!

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Posted: 20 July 2012 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
Ola Ari!
You couldn't have!! Oh MI GOSH!!!! This was splendid and so intriguing and wonderfully presented! I just loved the quote at the beginning and yes, it definitely went with the chapter you put up!
First of all, the profession and life of Khushi is definitely sounding Dark, but when it came the pathetic person, Arnav Singh Raizada, I feel him to be even darker and so she has ended up here in prison!
And what about the doctor? You mentioned that he was himself brought up in the boundary of Shantivan! Who is he? Aakash or NK? Or somebody else? ASR's brother or cousin?
And the flashback was well put! Wow! So Lavanya Kashyap has finally got some appreciation and is haughty gal out there!
Well, to be honest, even on screen, the locality of Khushi is definitely friendly, yet it is the same gossip crowd, who don't really bother if the person is alive or not, but bother only about their self-respect and the society's name! Yes, they hush down the cases of rape or being shot, and that triggers the anger in people like Khushi, because we all know that it is a sign of weakness and not at all about strength! Hiding and hushing such matters, is the sign of letting the culprit, criminal roam around freely and giving him/her the liberty to do it again!

Continue soon, gal!!
And thank you for the PM!

Annie

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