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_Tabs_ IF-Dazzler

Joined: 23 January 2012
Posts: 4656

Posted: 28 July 2012 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
lovely update ...the sad but true thing is one of the lines in there:

although we as humans all like to pretend we care, it's difficult to feel any genuine sympathy for a complete stranger.

beccky Senior Member

Joined: 15 February 2012
Posts: 327

Posted: 28 July 2012 at 2:54pm | IP Logged


The story is getting interesting day by day... 

peppygeek Goldie

Joined: 07 May 2010
Posts: 1807

Posted: 28 July 2012 at 3:10pm | IP Logged
I'm a little shocked. All your chapters here have a tendency of doing that to me.
A DIG runs the operation? Wow. Corruption at its best.
Khushi is very slowly warming up to the entire bloodshed and Mafia culture. Interesting.
Crazy_1001 Goldie

Joined: 09 April 2012
Posts: 2419

Posted: 28 July 2012 at 3:42pm | IP Logged
Oh wow! Akaash huh the Boss interesting to see him in a commanding character.

Every chapter adds more question to my list...yet slowly being answered Weird isn't? 
daydreamerr Senior Member

Joined: 17 February 2012
Posts: 676

Posted: 28 July 2012 at 3:47pm | IP Logged
My heart was racing through the entire chapter.
And jeeez, the police guy runs the entire thing. This is so well thought out and I get what you mean now when you said you had big plans for Aakash.
Everything is so well described, I feel like I'm right there in the moment. Khushi's and NK's relationship is super cite, even amidst cold blooded murder. I wonder how things will go from here considering Khushis seen so much already and NK doesn't seem like the type to lie to her. And I wonder how Khushi becomes un-naive.
I'm so so so glad you've planned this story to be a long one- don't think I could cope with it being short- it's too good! And you're totally right, pls don't ever give into people asking for 'smut' as you put it haha, the story is doing perfectly without it an it'd make the story odd of it wasn't meant to be incorporated.
Thanks for this, such an amazing story!
catalyst IF-Dazzler

Joined: 15 November 2011
Posts: 3962

Posted: 28 July 2012 at 3:49pm | IP Logged
khusi and nk are soo gud together...loved it!
darkninja Senior Member

Joined: 02 January 2012
Posts: 796

Posted: 28 July 2012 at 4:27pm | IP Logged
Wow im actually loving the NK and khushi jodi if akash is the boss then who's payal married to ????
kyunki_iloveu Goldie

Joined: 30 January 2006
Posts: 2074

Posted: 28 July 2012 at 4:31pm | IP Logged
amazinggg for sure..
its getting better and better..and i am liking nk and khushi course a fantasy wish

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