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mistyrains IF-Dazzler
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mistyrains

Joined: 27 January 2012
Posts: 2822

Posted: 28 July 2012 at 10:48pm | IP Logged
This story is so gripping and your writing is terrific.

I love the relationship, the understanding between NK and Khushi.

Also, Aakash, his description sounded eerie to me. Wonder why?

Though the whole mafia angle, seems to change the dynamics of the story.

The doctor, he has some stuff know? Somehow I find him to be very intriguing.

Loved the chapter and the quote :D

damonzlady Goldie
damonzlady
damonzlady

Joined: 29 April 2012
Posts: 1463

Posted: 29 July 2012 at 12:08am | IP Logged
"The Boss
Deputy Inspector General of Police, Aakash Malik..."
i actually got goosebumps reading this line...
n before i forget... YAY! u finally updated. i'm seriously hooked on this FF cuz it it truly an amazing
one!luv it n luv d update!
kritash IF-Rockerz
kritash
kritash

Joined: 04 January 2012
Posts: 7008

Posted: 29 July 2012 at 12:16am | IP Logged
really liked it.
fantastic and fabulous.
nice update.
CrazY-4-BaRuN Senior Member
CrazY-4-BaRuN
CrazY-4-BaRuN

Joined: 27 April 2012
Posts: 295

Posted: 29 July 2012 at 12:53am | IP Logged
well.. dat *time's up* is for us too...Cry
GayuArnav IF-Sizzlerz
GayuArnav
GayuArnav

Joined: 26 October 2011
Posts: 10351

Posted: 29 July 2012 at 12:55am | IP Logged
Akash is the boss! He seems to be a very dangerous man! 
Well khushi  trusts  NK so blindly? i guess in the future she MIGHT regret trusting him.
Well the story was amazing! The car chase was thrilling! Good one Rafa! :)
Loved it! 
jazzpreet Senior Member
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Joined: 03 February 2012
Posts: 643

Posted: 29 July 2012 at 2:02am | IP Logged
wow i love the characterization you've given to akash in this FF! soo dark and shady. i loved this update! i find it kinda weird though,  how khushi so quickly agreed to go on a drive with NK. she's only met him twice! lol reading this update really made me think that nk and khushi are a better couple than arnav and khushi. speaking of arnav, what is he up to?! will he be back in the next update?! gah, im dying to read the next chapter now! 
preetihere IF-Dazzler
preetihere
preetihere

Joined: 06 February 2012
Posts: 4244

Posted: 29 July 2012 at 2:13am | IP Logged
Aakash the Boss - that was a good twist!Big smile
Such a gripping tale, who was the victim? So her faith in NK's goodness is going to be shaken soon? Hmmm waiting for the mysteries to unfold !



ps: the Doctor is Maamaji ROFL


Edited by preetihere - 29 July 2012 at 2:12am
summaiyasayed IF-Sizzlerz
summaiyasayed
summaiyasayed

Joined: 10 February 2012
Posts: 15449

Posted: 29 July 2012 at 2:28am | IP Logged
 awesome work. Smile

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