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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 5:34am | IP Logged
Wooww NK! Loved it, continue soon!

blue-eye Goldie
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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 5:44am | IP Logged
Loved buddy.u r genius.:)
its addictive.wil love 2 read more.
mayabegum IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 6:44am | IP Logged
this update was very well written, thanks for the PM :D
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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 7:48am | IP Logged
wat an intriguing tale! khushi is one character, and from the prsent scenario it seems there was no arhi love story in da past!
daydreamerr Senior Member
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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 7:53am | IP Logged
Oh hi NK you lovely, adorable man! I'm also in love with him. And his dimple. Your description of him was fab.
Hahaha when he punched Arnav made me laugh loads. And I'm glad Arnav apologised, forcibly though it was.
I am so so so intrigued with her story and YES so glad that it's gonna be a long one. Your writing has so much depth, I love it.
Thanks for this! :')
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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 7:55am | IP Logged
OMG OMg...i just read all the 3 chapters and by god i am impressed. Arnav seems to be a disturbed soul and most certainly he would have raped khushi if it hadnt been for the payal...n payal his love well...poor payal, but i just cant imagine payal n arnav making out...its just too gross...well NK seems to a decent soul within the devil's gang. N sorry?? looking at arnav's personality...he actually went to say sorry for attempted rape??? And lastly lavanya a pimp (kind of)...hmm the cigratte smoking and tight fitted clothes...well no words left any more

Is khushi in jail for killing arnav?? it seems she still hates him so...oh god i just cant imagine this...plz let the end of the story not be this

Plz continue soon...yr quite talented


Edited by serialmaniac - 23 July 2012 at 7:56am
dumas IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 8:19am | IP Logged
awesome update loving that the characters are grey in  story! NK and Arnav  assassins / killer with morals and Khushi training to be a dance for a high class escort services and Payal a mom with a bad past with arnav and also the love of his life and Lavanya a professional pimp in sexy clothes and a smoking pipe loved how you are shaping the character well done  NK clearly emerges as a favorite as the mediator and just a sweet guy loved how NK showed him where he went wrong and arnav realizing if not for those payal he would have raped khushi loved how nk made him apologize awesome update and khushi said she does not hold grudge at the end of the first up date she sound like she does now wonder what arnav did to make her hold a grunge loved the update thanks for the pm



Edited by dumas - 23 July 2012 at 8:19am
inspiringstars Goldie
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Posted: 23 July 2012 at 8:25am | IP Logged
This story is quite different, nothing like I have read before, and I think I am enjoying the uniqueness of the story. 
It still confuses me, a little...LOL but otherwise I love the concept, Arnav's POV from the past, and Khushi's from the future. I love her conversations with the doctor and Arnav and NK's friendship.
Arnav and Khushi's first meeting was dangerous...and I can only expect the worst coming...but I love NK for making him apologize.
Oh the 2nd chapter, when he abused Payal was horrifying, what did Payal do? to make him so angry at her...its just so sad...

Loving this to bits...already addicted to it!

Thanks for the PM

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