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sahada Senior Member
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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
Heart cries... and beats in hope too..
;) Brilliant writing as usual! 

..Anita.. IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 3:46pm | IP Logged
Beautiful update!!
My heart went out to manorama
Thanks for the pm
sandani12 Groupbie
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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 1:27am | IP Logged
I started reading your work because V recommended it. And I am so glad I did! Keep up the awesome work!
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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 1:58pm | IP Logged
It's beautiful. Thnks for the pm.
priyakm Newbie
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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 5:10pm | IP Logged
I feel horrible for being such an irregular commenter (considering this is fast becoming one of my favorite FFs) but I just finished reading Chapter 14-16 and my goodness. 
First of all, the quotes you use. I don't want to say impressed because that sounds condescending but I'm amazed at how well your quotes integrate with the chapters. So many of them have gone into a Word Document that I keep with all my favorite quotes. (I also very much enjoy the authors you choose, always!)
Second, the story-telling and everything keeps getting better and better! I thought the whole back-story about Akash was super interesting, I didn't mind it one bit!
Wonderful updates! Looking forward to the next one :D
~Priya

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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 5:20am | IP Logged
Hi...

I just completed reading all 15 chapters - umm - 14 in a go and the last one separately. And I applaud you for coming up with this amazing story! It runs deep and has the potential to keep the readers glued to the words. The relations are twisted but they seem so real - so real!!! The crooked triangle of Arnav-Khushi-NK, then Lavanya and Shyam, Arnav-Payal pair, then Akash and Aman... 

Whoa! Mysterious, intriguing and amazinggg!!! Brilliant work dear... I'd like to receive PMs for this one, if you don't mind...

Another thing - check out this one at your leisure... It is a thread about readers. I've mentioned you in my post for this lovely story I just happened to stumble upon!


Love
Pearl


Edited by -.Pearl.- - 20 November 2012 at 5:21am
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Posted: 21 November 2012 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
Hey. Im sorry for not reading this before. I just finished reading all of the chapters, and I love them! The story is slightly disturbing, but its written so well that I cant stop. It's one of those stories that you can't not read. I like how we learn about khushi's syories through her sessions with the doctor. I think last chapter was my favorite just because it showed a different side to Manorama and explains why akash is how he is. And I really liked the last part in which the nurse almost reels backward when she sees the look in Manorama's eyes. Her son did grow up to uphold his familys legacy. As much as his killing as payals kids sickened me, its crazy how his point of view about them being innocent was actually pretty credible. I cant wait to read more of the story and how/ why akash died. Oh, and i especially liked khushi's bluntness towards akash although she was scared to death and was being slightly (more like very) foolish
noreen Goldie
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Posted: 22 November 2012 at 9:07am | IP Logged
plz plz update soon!!!!!!

thnks

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