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flowers4u IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 5:20pm | IP Logged
Omg actually feel bad for akas wonder who the real top gun is...fantastic update...loving the story...continue soon

drunkiiebabe IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 6:01pm | IP Logged
fantastic update
moomin4455 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 6:14pm | IP Logged
An absolutely stunning chapter as per usual!!! 

The backstory behind Akash's parents was poignant - they loved each other! My heart broke for Mano - to be intelligent and poor; to understand all the things that you can never hope to have! Cry

What kind of life was she dragged into by marrying him? What happened to Akash???? 

Please invite me to read - I have to know what happens next *bites nails*! My email is [email protected]

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CheshireBilli IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 6:19pm | IP Logged
That was BEAUTIFUL. Manorama and Mahinder's story is heart-wrenching. I am so intrigued right now. Who is Gauri's first born if Akash was meant to be a decoy only? More importantly, is Akash still just a decoy or did he somehow take Gauri's firstborn's place?
This story is easily good enough to be published. It is a LOT better than some of the drivel that actually does get published.
Please do invite me to the Tainted blog! Email id-- [email protected]

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preetijaiswal19 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 9:32pm | IP Logged
Great chapter! I could feel te crackling chemistry of Mahi and Mano, kinda like ArHi! Lol! 
dilectus Senior Member
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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 9:38pm | IP Logged
you kill me!!!

you fu**ing kill me every darn time!!!

and i love this feeling which remains afterward
blackdice1001 Goldie
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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 12:15am | IP Logged
I don't know how you do it. I'm in love with Manorama and Mahinder's story. The narrating was beautiful I loved these new characters. Gauri seems like an interesting character I hope we'll see more of her later
Akash is a decoy. Then who is the real leader?
Very curious about Akash and the Malik family.
Wonderful update.
NestleToulouse IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 1:35am | IP Logged
Wonderful update !! Thank you so much for the PM dear ! Hug

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