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purplelolo Senior Member

Joined: 11 July 2005
Posts: 430

Posted: 12 November 2012 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
So after every part my jaw was dropped open.
How do you do that?
First of all, I love how uiu name your chapters.
It reminds me of how I used to write

Secondly, I think there is so much that I have missed in the parts. I should go back one of these days and read them again.
I can't wait till the things are out in the open.

Its so twisted and layered that I cant help but love it.

And is it weird that I like the doc and arnav aswell?

Edited by purplelolo - 12 November 2012 at 9:48pm

Curiousmind Senior Member

Joined: 07 March 2012
Posts: 503

Posted: 12 November 2012 at 8:56pm | IP Logged
This is one twisted story cause one minute you are hating a character and the next you get where they are coming from. I mean akash's explanation for killing two kids is so twisted that one wonders about what is right and what is wrong?

You write brilliantly because your writing makes me question a situation from another point of view which I know is 200% wrong yet somehow one wonders. I hope I'm making sense but that is the magic of your writing. IF-Rockerz

Joined: 27 May 2008
Posts: 5981

Posted: 13 November 2012 at 5:44am | IP Logged
chapter 10 done whoaa what a frndship shyam n lava ..
wow i luv volcano ! IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 5981

Posted: 13 November 2012 at 6:45am | IP Logged
whoaa what an update akash was so clam n right about killing kids lol!

n what a twist! he killed himself ! CANT WAIT FOR NEXT!!!!!

whoaa n the next one will be on a new thread iam guessing :))

can i have a pic of khushi's gown :D?
sahada Senior Member

Joined: 13 June 2012
Posts: 723

Posted: 13 November 2012 at 2:12pm | IP Logged
He made the murder of two completely untainted children seem like the right thing to do... bas***d!
'He had to alter his basic comprehension of the difference between right and wrong or he would go insane.' .. Well I won't call him of sound mind either... 
'If the price for that is my eternal damnation, then so be it.'  He really feels there's no other way for him to be.. Sad! 
It's easier when you either love sm1 or hate em.. but this thing in btwn tht I feel aftr ths chpt.. a lil unsettling.. YOU are a brilliant writer and driving me kukoo with it!!!!!
I need your funny A!!! To balance.. I'm sinking into despondency with all this honesty! Puhleeease! On my knees hands clasped tight puppy dog face.. anyth you ask!

AllSmiles86 Senior Member

Joined: 25 February 2012
Posts: 793

Posted: 13 November 2012 at 4:43pm | IP Logged
"You haven't been in this World very long, Khushi. You wouldn't understand. But when young boys enter our World at that age, no matter who tries to protect them or how hard, they will eventually end up becoming just as cursed as men like Arnav and Shyam and Nand Kishore. Often of their own free will. The irony is, we don't force anybody into anything: They choose this life. They think it'll be fun or they think it'll be a way out from the nightmare of their 'real' life"
Indeed, he has a warp sense of morality but not everyone just stumbles on this. There is a reason or I would like to think that way for his behavior. Nonetheless, nothing justifies the killing on an innocent!
aquagal IF-Rockerz

Joined: 03 July 2012
Posts: 8588

Posted: 14 November 2012 at 10:50am | IP Logged
Read the last two updates now. Gosh!! akash thought he did the right thing taking innocent lives of those two boys?? But why did he kill himself?? How did that happen??
tanurocks IF-Dazzler

Joined: 30 October 2011
Posts: 3322

Posted: 15 November 2012 at 3:11am | IP Logged
akash's perception of rite and wrong are really amusing...

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