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lakraj80 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 1:15pm | IP Logged
Totally unexpected for akash to die, did not know Tht was coming! But beautiful update as usual. Thnks for the pm.

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Joined: 04 July 2012
Posts: 176

Posted: 11 November 2012 at 1:24pm | IP Logged
love love love the update! How do you come up with these amazing storylines?
PS update Cafe du Soleil soon pleaseee xxx
wildandsweet Goldie
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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 7:43pm | IP Logged
wow
awesome update
definately agree with the other members you need to write novels and even turn this into a novel
its brilliant

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norolim

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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 8:02pm | IP Logged
I cannot believe akash explained himself
Woah!!!
purplelove Goldie
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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 8:37pm | IP Logged
Chapter 13:
Holy cow!  I enjoyed reading about your dark Aakash.  He is so viscous.  A really well written character.

Chapter 14:
Aakash (your writing) once again amazed this reader. Clap

Chapter 15:
Reading Aakash's view for what is right and wrong was very interesting (story wise).
With this line,
"Because Aakash killed himself instead."  l was again reminded that with your writing I will never be able to guess what you will share next. 

Looking forward to update 16.  Thanks for the PMs.
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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
Amazing update!
 Akash is just a sick, pervert. How cum he justified the murder of two innocent kids! But I'm proud of Khushi that she voiced her opinion and bluntly said that she hated him. She is a brave girl indeed. Akash wants Khushi to help him murder another guy. How disgusting! I think Khushi will murder Akash instead let him kill Oliver.
Looking forward for the next update.
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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 11:52pm | IP Logged
that was freaking awesome update yaar.
 
i have goose-bumps
 
dying to read more
sunny_sarun IF-Dazzler
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Posts: 2953

Posted: 12 November 2012 at 12:59am | IP Logged
akash killed himself??? ok u have officially driven me nuts Big smile

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