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inspiringstars Goldie
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 10:09pm | IP Logged
Damn, Chapter 15 already !

I am sorry, I couldnt catch up with the updates earlier, I promise I will do it soon, and write comments for them too, if only I know whats going on.

Thanks for the PMs.

nomad.ness Goldie
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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 12:09am | IP Logged
You actually make Akash's twisted morality seem... a bit rational. He guaranteed the kids heaven while they were destined to be in hell if they lived. And he thinks he has no room for retribution, that he's got no hopes of salvation but somehow through this I think he does.

And.. oddly, I am getting attracted to the Doc. Interesting character! I wonder how he will shape up the story at the end. 

So, Akash killed himself?! What the..!  Gosh, can't wait for the next update!!!

You're such an exceptional writer. Keep it coming!


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serialmaniac IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 12:16am | IP Logged
Still in shock cant comment!!!!...aakash the ruthless, ambitious crimimanl of the game jumped the gun?? y would he kill himself?
Shalve IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 4:48am | IP Logged
superb update...loved it
TeleFan Goldie
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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 5:25am | IP Logged
Riveting ... Love the psychosis

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darkninja Senior Member
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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 5:56am | IP Logged
first of all khushi rocks I loved it when she actually said what she thought
you just shone akash in a new light I don't agree with what he did but his explanation made me feel different about him
and W*F akash killed himself
cant wait for the next chapter
snoopy84 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 9:08am | IP Logged
Great update Akash really is something else
maddieee IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 11 November 2012 at 10:27am | IP Logged
Akash killed himself!!!!!!! uff dat was unexpected... kudos to u for thinking of such an interesting story... the different layers of complexity in this story is just awesome

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