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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 10:53am | IP Logged
that was amazing
loved how you included his father conversation with mahinder
ooh so aakash was the decoy, did he kill himself to protect the first child?
and who is gauri first child?

cant wait to find all this out=]
will pm you my email address,,please invite me to read your blog

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 11:36am | IP Logged
I know I've already commented on this chapter, but I had a sudden thought. What if Arnav is Gauri's first born? What if THAT is how the decoy works? Arnav works lower down in the hierarchy TO PROTECT him-- so that no one suspects who is really in charge. And that includes taking the fall for Akash and going to jail for him.
And he turns a blind eye to everything Akash does-- his ruthlessness and his unfathomable cruelty, to maintain that illusion. Or maybe it's a part of the act.
I don't know how Oliver or Khushi fit in here yet. Of course you won't tell me, because that would give away the climax but I am DYING to find out.
Too convoluted? I don't know. Have I mentioned before that I LOVE this story?
sahada Senior Member
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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 12:19pm | IP Logged
Heart cries... and beats in hope too..
;) Brilliant writing as usual! 
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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 3:46pm | IP Logged
Beautiful update!!
My heart went out to manorama
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 1:27am | IP Logged
I started reading your work because V recommended it. And I am so glad I did! Keep up the awesome work!
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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 1:58pm | IP Logged
It's beautiful. Thnks for the pm.
priyakm Newbie
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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 5:10pm | IP Logged
I feel horrible for being such an irregular commenter (considering this is fast becoming one of my favorite FFs) but I just finished reading Chapter 14-16 and my goodness. 
First of all, the quotes you use. I don't want to say impressed because that sounds condescending but I'm amazed at how well your quotes integrate with the chapters. So many of them have gone into a Word Document that I keep with all my favorite quotes. (I also very much enjoy the authors you choose, always!)
Second, the story-telling and everything keeps getting better and better! I thought the whole back-story about Akash was super interesting, I didn't mind it one bit!
Wonderful updates! Looking forward to the next one :D
~Priya

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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 5:20am | IP Logged
Hi...

I just completed reading all 15 chapters - umm - 14 in a go and the last one separately. And I applaud you for coming up with this amazing story! It runs deep and has the potential to keep the readers glued to the words. The relations are twisted but they seem so real - so real!!! The crooked triangle of Arnav-Khushi-NK, then Lavanya and Shyam, Arnav-Payal pair, then Akash and Aman... 

Whoa! Mysterious, intriguing and amazinggg!!! Brilliant work dear... I'd like to receive PMs for this one, if you don't mind...

Another thing - check out this one at your leisure... It is a thread about readers. I've mentioned you in my post for this lovely story I just happened to stumble upon!


Love
Pearl


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