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mirka88 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 7:24am | IP Logged
I love the dialogue exchanged between your characters. You write them in a way that if you came to think of it, there'd be no better way to say them.


The way Khushi spoke to Aakash. My god. And then we get a glimpse of Aakash-the man of Ice that never melts or does it? A dark man with a warped sense of justice or madman..there's not much difference between the two.


The last line was a hard punch that came out of nowhere.. Why did Aakash kill himself? Can't wait to read!

P.S. I love Ben Winshaw!! 

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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 7:38am | IP Logged
Page 123 edited

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summaiyasayed IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 7:46am | IP Logged
nice updt
 
 
thanks for pm
TabbyJ. IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 9:15am | IP Logged
does she mean akash actually killed "killed" himsefl :0

and wow i can actually imagine khushi in that dress!
no matter what lavanya is, i still feel a great respect towards that woman!
she looks like the epitome of elegance~
\and oh well what can i say about akash he is hell intimidating!!!
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 9:33am | IP Logged
WOW! 
How do you do this? 
Get us readers so involved with your story! 
Excellent chapter! :)
russelskhushi IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 9:47am | IP Logged
whats most amazing abt this ff is that one can never predect what will happen...it keeps u glued till the last...i just love it how u do so...awesome update..
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 11:06am | IP Logged
Gotta say Khushi has some serious balls! 

Did he kill himself because the realization of Khushis harsh truth finally sunk in? Or someone spied his drink :)
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Posted: 10 November 2012 at 11:16am | IP Logged
fantastic update 

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