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aysh05 Senior Member
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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 10:01am | IP Logged
I thought I was going to be on first page... but missed it by that much _____, I will pm you my e-mail addy to request an invite to the Tainted blog. 

Thank you

emistry IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 10:03am | IP Logged
Good to know Akash's roots... Interesting.. I wonder who Gauri's first born? The guy that he told Khushi to distract maybe?!?

So Akash kills himself.. What a way to go.. In a way fitting since he chose his own fate.. And was at no one's mercy
summaiyasayed IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 10:23am | IP Logged
awesome updt
 
 
thanks for pm
kvarsha IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 10:24am | IP Logged
nice updateee...
i really loved the mano here manintaing herself very corect...
ithnx 4 pm Big smile
 


Edited by kvarsha - 17 November 2012 at 10:25am
Polkadots78 Goldie
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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 10:38am | IP Logged
That was a hard hitting chapter...I am still a little fuzzy about the details...I don't know what a decoy is supposed to do...but your manorama and mahi are very strong characters...so like you said...I am going to shut up and listen...

Your quote at the beginning of the chapter sent chills down m spine...as usual very apt...
mirka88 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 10:39am | IP Logged
This chapter was so beautiful..you're right.. when you're telling this kind of story, no one wants to interrupt. 

I can only imagine Manorama's anguish in the last part..when the nurse wishes that Aakash be like his father. 
GoldenEyes Goldie
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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 10:40am | IP Logged
awesome! thanks for pm 
lankan Senior Member
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Posted: 17 November 2012 at 11:07am | IP Logged
Amazing ! The story of Mano and Mahi is truly very touching. The last part almost bought tears to my eyes. Great job ! 

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