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moonlight99 Senior Member

Joined: 28 October 2011
Posts: 509

Posted: 06 November 2012 at 4:16pm | IP Logged
This was such an awesome chapter! Akash is a the dirtiest piece of scum in existence. And he terrified me...but what is going to happen to Khushi !!
And I feel so sad for Payal, no matter how terrible she is or going to be no mother deserves to see her children die in front of her. 
I feel so sad.
But great update...and hope everything is going fine in Cambridge!

Haw! You get a month and a half off...I only get a month ! How unfair!

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drunkiiebabe IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 27 August 2010
Posts: 22900

Posted: 06 November 2012 at 4:21pm | IP Logged
awesome update
Hunnybunny3 Senior Member

Joined: 24 February 2012
Posts: 725

Posted: 06 November 2012 at 4:26pm | IP Logged
Wow!! What a fantastic FF this is Clap Just finishes reading all 14 chapters. Very dark, a treat from the usual I must say. Each of the characters have such a  complex persona.
 Aakash has got to be the most frightening.  He's too calm...and the kiss and lick...Urgh. Had the chills  
Felt bad for Payal as the kids were being cremated. I can imagine she'll have her revenge. She's got nothing else to live for. 
Can't wait to find out what's happened to NK. Poor guy Unhappy 
Loved the to and fro between Lavanya and Shyam
Arnav sleeping with Khushi- I wonder what NK will say when he finds out?
Khushi going from entertainer to murderer...Can't wait ti find out what the hell happened 
And who the heck is the Dr?? Need a name soon girl 

Finally the Tainted cast...Talk about delicious. They are all HOT HOT HOT eye candy (even the girls). 

Ooh and thanks for all the pm's. Even though I'm hardly on here these days it's so nice to be able to catch up with your wonderfully brilliant writing when I am. Look forward to the next update.xx

nyans Newbie

Joined: 07 March 2012
Posts: 33

Posted: 06 November 2012 at 4:36pm | IP Logged
...faning herself...girl those are one heck of a good looking cast...who was the girl that was khushi before and do you have the names of those provide if you got it...i do know some of them though but want to know others...and who did you put as veer cuz there is no picture...i just stumble upon your ff and girl hav i been missing my beauty read your recent update at india forum and i think i have to look for my dictionary to look for words that would do justice describing ur ff after i read it...and i srsly gt a crush at bErenice afta watchin skyfall though m nt turnin lesbian ...((jon muaah still))...( dont wanna b inbetween d orlando n miranda) hahah...even d villian was effin sxc ahhaha...hey please do provide the name of the other models ...
ayshaomar IF-Rockerz

Joined: 25 May 2011
Posts: 7487

Posted: 06 November 2012 at 6:12pm | IP Logged
fab update
so know akaash has his eyes on khushi and he is the top dog neither shyaam nor arnav can stop him in that no matter how much they try
sohara IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 31 March 2012
Posts: 13032

Posted: 06 November 2012 at 7:32pm | IP Logged
i'm really scared for Khushi.
 What the monster gonna do to her on the next meeting. I wish he died before that or  are you planning Khushi to kill Akash?
Waiting for the next update.

AllSmiles86 Senior Member

Joined: 25 February 2012
Posts: 793

Posted: 06 November 2012 at 7:51pm | IP Logged

Aakash scares the shit out of me. And, to think that Khushi is caught in this web only sends chill down my spine! Those eyes dont help. Good looks with a sadistic pleasure in killing kids is heart fearing combination.

..Anita.. IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 08 November 2010
Posts: 16637

Posted: 06 November 2012 at 10:36pm | IP Logged
Akash creeps me out *shudders*

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