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araina7 Senior Member

Joined: 17 February 2012
Posts: 309

Posted: 06 November 2012 at 8:08am | IP Logged
Oh shit!!! What an inhuman piece of a shit is Akash??? I just feel like killing him. Arghhh. But there is something about his character which really fascinates me. No , I don't like him nor do I feel he is human in any sense. But his character is so twisted, so f**ked up, yet so intriguing that you just can't help and crave to read more about him.
I feel terribly sad for Payal. I can't even say that I feel her pain coz I'm not a mother but as a woman I can definitely say that no woman deserves to go through such pain. That is devastating. Cry

P.S. I followed you on twitter Smile

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__blossom__ IF-Dazzler

Joined: 21 February 2012
Posts: 4146

Posted: 06 November 2012 at 8:15am | IP Logged
omg poor payal...srsly y on earth would khushi kill her??? The suspense is killing me -_- great update!
Omg Akash's such a ba**ard khushi would go right??? *sick*
apoorvaarnav IF-Dazzler

Joined: 10 April 2012
Posts: 3384

Posted: 06 November 2012 at 8:20am | IP Logged
you are my one  gr8 inspiration to write crime stories!!
it was so scary and chilling at the same time..
feeling very very sad for payal and khushi :( :(
akash u f**kin bas***d Angry

thnx for the PM !
suma.2911 Groupbie

Joined: 25 September 2012
Posts: 147

Posted: 06 November 2012 at 8:24am | IP Logged
the devil always comes to collect... how simplistic of shyam to assume that he could have kept it under wraps... mere puppets...

waking up in the morning to this.. thanku so much for the PM :D
summaiyasayed IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 10 February 2012
Posts: 15449

Posted: 06 November 2012 at 9:00am | IP Logged
nice updt
updt soon
thanks for pm
russelskhushi IF-Dazzler

Joined: 11 May 2012
Posts: 3017

Posted: 06 November 2012 at 9:07am | IP Logged loving Akash!!! he's just too cool...
dumas IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 21 April 2006
Posts: 29532

Posted: 06 November 2012 at 9:40am | IP Logged
what the hell akash is so cool and collective and one damn scary bas***d payal loss was so heart felt and khushi to be akash new playing awesome update thanks for the pm
vgedin IF-Dazzler

Joined: 26 August 2012
Posts: 4772

Posted: 06 November 2012 at 9:42am | IP Logged
Firstly, the Skyfall song goes so bloody well with this chapter. I could add this to the list of unbelievably perfect things. 

And the update - god Akash that beastly bast*rd! It gave me the chills - not the kiss but when he ran his tongue over her ear. Snake. I can almost hear him hiss! 

I missed the doctor in this update though.I'd really like to have Khushi speak about her intrigue with The Boss' eyes. And I'd also love a Pay-aash twist in future. 

I assume people have said this to you several times. But I shall say it again - you are a gifted writer. And its such a pleasure reading your work. I am so excited about the next updates! 

PS - Berenice Marlohe - now thats what I call a muse. Sigh. 

P.P.S - Thats for the PM! 

Edited by vgedin - 06 November 2012 at 10:45am

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