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toblerone Senior Member
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Posted: 06 November 2012 at 5:51am | IP Logged
i love this story!!
can't imagine the pain payal is going through..so sad!!
 
and akash is ...let's just say, very different from iss pyaar-akash!!

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Posted: 06 November 2012 at 6:10am | IP Logged
every time Akash pops up i get goosebumps with the bombs he drops
on the lives of the others.poor Payal, sad to see her all shattered and 
yet unable to do anything. and now with the focus shifting on Khushi,
wonder what's in store for her...

can't wait for the next update!

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ava23 Senior Member
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Posted: 06 November 2012 at 6:12am | IP Logged
oh god really Aakash is very beastly... it is almost like a role reversed between Aakash and shyam from ipkknd... i think the one whom Aakash will "think of leaving" is NK??!! poor payal and now khushi Unhappy m scared 4 her..

incredible update Thumbs Up

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norolim Goldie
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Posted: 06 November 2012 at 6:17am | IP Logged
Res*
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Dayumn girl. f**king scared me. -.-
 
Akaash is the scariest bas***d I know, no I mean really >.< Kya cheez nikaali hai yaar :O Scary. Even his way of propositioning is damn scary.
 
I feel so bad for Khushi right now. I also know that you've mentioned that your Khushi is an unreliable narrator, and I cant believe her. But I really do feel bad for her. It just doesn't seem to be...fair. Maybe she has committed crimes in her life, but regardless, I still feel sad in a way.
 
Im in awe of how hard-hitting your writing actually is. Brilliant man!
 
Avi


Edited by dreamyshadows - 06 November 2012 at 12:10pm

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snoopy84 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 06 November 2012 at 6:40am | IP Logged
Great update Akash really is horrid worried for Khushi now wonder what he has planned for her. Poor Payal her grief was really intense

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Posted: 06 November 2012 at 7:01am | IP Logged
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Posted: 06 November 2012 at 7:29am | IP Logged

I have to say this, if I liked (am I allowed, that word) Akash's style of execution in the previous update, I absolutely loved his way of propositioning Khushi. The guy just stamped his authority and in such an emphatic style, super cool. The guy has a 'task' for her and is that what it is called these days, I have a lot to brush up on.

 

I too am breathing in and out, in and out, in and out after this punching update.

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preetijaiswal19 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 06 November 2012 at 7:39am | IP Logged
Omg...akaashhh! I hate himmm...great update!

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