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araina7 Senior Member

Joined: 17 February 2012
Posts: 309

Posted: 09 November 2012 at 8:01pm | IP Logged
That was hella amazinggg update. I effing loved it. Damn I'm even more fascinated with Akash now. Kill me already lol. I will be back later with longer comment after I re-read it and find right words to comment. Right now I'm just too overwhelmed with the story LOL LOL LOL


Doctor- "I'm glad you survived."
Khushi- "I'm not"
Errr that convo had me shiver ran through my body. There is just something about the way khushi replies to the doctor that really scares me. She is sooo cryptic.

Lavanya really does care about Khushi, at least I felt so or may be she just doesn't want khushi to have merciless death. Anyway I love lavanya.

Khushi really is a brave and strong woman. If I were in her place, there is no way I could stand straight in front of Aakash let alone spat out on him. Errr that takes a lot of courage. She had witness Aakash murdering a man and then two innocent children yet she dared to act in such way. Take a bow khushi.

The kids were innocent that's why he kill them? So, that is his justification which sounded almost right even to my ears. It does not go according to my moral values but if you look at it on his terms it sounds right. God this is just so f**ked up.

At the risk of sounding completely inhuman I will like to confess that I think I'm starting to like Aakash's character. I mean I don't "like" him in " like like" way but I can't help myself to feel attracted to him. Do I even make sense here????
I don't want to like him, till the last chapter I was ready to kill him and now all of sudden I'm so intrigued towards him. This feels sooo wrong yet so right. Rafa, what are you doing with my head??? I think I need to visit Shrink like Khushi lol.

You really are an amazing writer. God I f**king love this story and it keeps getting better and better.

P.S. I watched Skyfall last night. I can totally picture Khushi in the same black gown that Berenice Marlohe wore in the movie.

Edited by araina7 - 10 November 2012 at 5:08pm

niharika111 Senior Member

Joined: 09 August 2012
Posts: 442

Posted: 09 November 2012 at 8:05pm | IP Logged
Wow! This story gets more complex with every update...I can only try to imagine what writing this story does to you...I mean every character is so twisted...right now I am completely baffled with Akashi's persona...he is extremely intelligent, devilishly handsome and functions with a head as cool as the cucumber...I wonder what it takes to kill two kids point blank and remain sane after that...he is one messed up guy...poor khushi...dragged into this mess all for a ride with nk...
You are a brilliant author and might I say, doing a wonderful job with this story...pray carry on...
emistry IF-Dazzler

Joined: 09 February 2012
Posts: 3440

Posted: 09 November 2012 at 8:13pm | IP Logged
Akash's exPlaination had me speechless! Also he foes have a warped sense if the world!

So I got a little confused... Who kills himself? Akash or Oliver?!

Also loved khushi being candid and honest! I think she increased respect for herself in Akash's eyes by a tenfold!!
Chocolate... IF-Rockerz

Joined: 15 February 2010
Posts: 6392

Posted: 09 November 2012 at 8:37pm | IP Logged
Wait who kills himself akash or Oliver?
Kalyaani IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 15 March 2012
Posts: 21397

Posted: 09 November 2012 at 8:40pm | IP Logged
May I have Akash? PLEASE...begging on my knees now...PLEASE...PLEASE...
aysh05 Senior Member

Joined: 08 August 2012
Posts: 571

Posted: 09 November 2012 at 8:43pm | IP Logged
Your words are like peaches ... Continue soon :)

citi Senior Member

Joined: 25 May 2012
Posts: 599

Posted: 09 November 2012 at 9:03pm | IP Logged
What twisted logic and yet sounding so sane. Akash is some character you have created...mesmerizing and repelling all at once.
Brilliantly told story. Cant wait for it to continue.
moomin4455 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 08 March 2012
Posts: 4146

Posted: 09 November 2012 at 9:11pm | IP Logged
Wow... Shocked

This story...this like a beautiful car crash waiting to happen that I cannot look away from.

Your writing is exquisite - bar none. Brava! Clap

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