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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 12:50pm | IP Logged
That was a bit hard to read through ... but was necessary. Excellent writing

Edited by aysh05 - 31 October 2012 at 12:50pm

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Posted: 31 October 2012 at 9:51pm | IP Logged
wow. This chapter was insane. 
He killed the innocent kids! Loathe the man, Akaash! 
Can't wait to read further to see how Arnav reacted to this and Payal... like AngelTeen said, I think to get Payal out of her misery Khushi killed her... or Payal actually asked for it herself..?

Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 1:54pm | IP Logged
two innocent kids... Cry

can't wait for the next update!

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Posted: 02 November 2012 at 4:47pm | IP Logged
ohmygoodness...

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 12:44am | IP Logged
wow... this is  such a brilliant piece of work...Clap
do pm me when u update Day Dreaming

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 5:52am | IP Logged
omg...how can akash be sooo ruthless...he killed the children without any mercy.,...very sad update hun n thnx 4da pm dear!!!

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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 4:50pm | IP Logged

---"So from now on, you will learn to use these." the first bullet burst through the brain of her eldest son. Her patient, intelligent, caring, loving son who wanted nothing more than to be a police officer... "Instead of these." the second ripped through the heart of her youngest. Her funny, mischievous, playful son whose aim in life was to drive his elder brother insane... 


"You will never attempt to hide anything from me ever again." ---


Way to drive in a point Akash. The way you wrote these lines Rafa - to the point, crisp, cruel without any added frills - I can see the scene playing out in front of my eyes, and I can NOT get it out of my head. I keep seeing Akash shooting the kids through the head and heart just to make a point.Ugh.


----"JUST MAKE HER STOP SCREAMING!!!!!" ---


And then there's Khushi. So twisted at times, but always intriguing. This time round I saw a bit of the Khushi she keeps locked up inside her - the one she covers up with her madness(?).




PS : Well obviously you do not know who I am and so the sudden comment might be a little disconcerting. But I came across several mentions of your stories and decided to read them. I think I read them all in a go and felt a little too overwhelmed to comment then. So yeah, her's my first comment appreciating your awesome work. :D


PPS: The Svengali is my personal favorite though :P It's something about the word 'Svengali' that got to me. That and of course Lana Del Ray.

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Posted: 04 November 2012 at 7:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by UltimateWishes

Heyy I lovedd your FF

Have read it all in one go ...
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Just one question...I love how this is in khushi's point of view ...but are you ever going to.. like. ..talk about arnav's point of view...i mean mention where he is in the present ??


Thankss for the Beautiful update:)




Present day Arnav?

I'd love to- but that would give away faaar too much ;) 

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