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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 5:36am | IP Logged
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Edited by icegurl789 - 22 July 2012 at 6:05am

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 6:05am | IP Logged
thatz a terrific update!
arnav character is brilliantly etched...love his attitude and his shady,mean character extremely intriguing...hooked on to this!

so the doc's is none other than akash itself...m i correct??

m getting impatient...plz update soon!

luking forward to how u gel the main characters-khusi and arnav together!


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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 6:17am | IP Logged
This was simply bone chilling.

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 6:54am | IP Logged
wow!intense stuff !! arnav is truly ruthless in this! wonder what he did to khushi!
a very gripping story! can't wait to read further! thnx for pm!

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 7:33am | IP Logged
Jeeez, Payal and Arnav. Who'd have thought it.
I like the way you use the characters and fit them into different roles.
Can't wait to read more about Arnavs life, I like how sarcastic and blunt he is. The whole gang thing seems really interesting.
Thanks a lot.

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 7:47am | IP Logged

This is what I did after reading the updates:

 

Opened another tab, googled dictionary.com and looked for synonyms for the word awesome. I am copy pasting the received results.

 

alarming, astonishing, awe-inspiring, awful, beautiful, breath taking, daunting, dreadful, exalted, fearful, fearsome, formidable, frantic, frightening, grand, hairy*, horrible, horrifying, imposing, impressive, intimidating, magnificent, majestic, mean, mind-blowing, moving, nervous, overwhelming, real gone, shocking, something else, striking, stunning, stupefying, terrible, terrifying, wonderful, wondrous, zero cool

 

This is what your update is, all this and much more, with my limited ability I simply state, I really like your work. I am unsure to comment, more often than nought, I feel what I have to say is inadequate.

Do write, as we here are always eager to read good work.

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 8:10am | IP Logged
Amazing update!
Actually im shocked with many facts of this story!
Arnav is 38? LOL  I should say he was 38 cause this is a past right! 
Payal betrayed him? 
After reading the entire update only i realized why he left khushi after seeing her payals. 
I just enjoyed it! Waiting for the next update! :) Loved it! 


Edited by GayuArnav - 22 July 2012 at 8:09am
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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 8:25am | IP Logged
wow, this was awesome loved the ending! this story is already getting me interested!

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