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sweet_5 Goldie
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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 4:23pm | IP Logged
Holy mother Akash

I just live these FF's that deal with crime and gangsters, my kind of story

great job! Keep it up

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PepsiGirl101 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 4:57pm | IP Logged
SHIT NO AKASH NOT THE CHILDREN!!!!!

I agree this chapter was definitely not for the faint hearted... cold and ruthless  
but isn't this an everyday thing in some places...its sad...
i feel like her screams are echoing in my ears too...

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Sarikaa97 Goldie
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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 5:57pm | IP Logged
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anaidama Groupbie
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Joined: 27 September 2012
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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 8:35pm | IP Logged

Whatever is required to take the story forward... please... write away. You need not feel hesitant about how readers perceive it. I am a mother, but I feel this scene was necessary to show the ruthlessness of Akash. We live in a world, where child prostitution exists, so honestly... nothing surprises me. 

For a really really really really long time I HATED Mario Puzo's The Family. But I never stopped counting him among my favourite author's. I dont know how else to encourage you to carry forward with your story. :-)

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 8:48pm | IP Logged
Akash!!!! can't imagine what Payal must have felt on watching the scene! 
was waiting for an update on this one for so long :) love this story!
and your new characters - Khushi is my fav...coz I couldnt imagine Sanaya at all as the Khushi in this story :)

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meera06 Goldie
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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 9:08pm | IP Logged
this was something I did not expect though you gave a fair amount of warning...but still
I don't even want to imagine Payal's state...

The cast..Arnav and Lav ..hot...Wink

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..Anita.. IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 10:10pm | IP Logged
Omg wow...I cannot believe that happened

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AllSmiles86 Senior Member
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Joined: 25 February 2012
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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 10:20pm | IP Logged
The bas***d Aakash couldnt get anymore ruthless and I am loving this story that much more. Yes, its quite disturbing to know that KHUSHI got affected by it to the extent that she herself plays a keyrole in the demise of Payal and the mob. This story is so intense and merciless. You cant help but feel sorry for every damn character in this story because each one has its own demons to tackle, all alone under the facade of the System. Brilliant Update!
 
BTW, OH MY FREAKING GOD! HAVE MERCY ON US WITH THOSE PICTURES OF THE CHARACTERS!!! Where in the world are those good looking men and how come we dont see them in NYC?!?!?! And, LAVANYA IS FREAKING HOT! Love the characters!!!!


Edited by AllSmiles86 - 28 October 2012 at 10:22pm

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