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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 9:42am | IP Logged
A very intense and disturbing chapter.
Akaash is ruthless and i dont blame the others for being petrified of him. Poor NK he didn't get away and now i understand why he was so panicked. Akaash is f**ked up.
 

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 10:11am | IP Logged
Omggg...Akash is a psycho...poor kids...poor Payal...so want to know what happens next!

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 10:27am | IP Logged
i think i am going to have nightmares after this chapter..having two small children myself!

thank you for not making it more gory... i am still going to read it as its a fascinating story!


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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 11:11am | IP Logged
Hey!
 
I'm having to think hard after reading this ... but what I can say is that Aakash, well isn't fit to be called a human and that is just plainly putting it nicely. Innocent children being killed right infront of their mother. Horrendous. AngryAngry
 
 


Edited by ASRandKKGSRFan - 28 October 2012 at 11:11am

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 11:55am | IP Logged
i love this chapter. it was brilliantly written! great work! :D

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
omg cant believe he killed both her kids was real messed up

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
wow that was really shocking
cant believe aakash did that just to prove a point
really messed up

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 1:08pm | IP Logged
Omg por kids. . Kush is stil cryng for them por kids damn this akash can stoop so low :-/ thnx 4 pm :-D

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