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Sarina2012 Senior Member
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Posted: 05 November 2012 at 12:55am | IP Logged
Oh my god! I came cross this FF thru V's 'best stories' and man... Am I glad! This story is brilliant! I mean it's dark and all but it's absolutely awesome.. So gripping..
In the first chapter, I thot the dr was ASR then of course he was not. But the characterization was just so gruesome. Arnav,NK, Aman, aakash, Payal, lav, Shyam..(not to mention each is so hot).
I read the entire 13 chapters and I m spell bound by how u have weaved the story!
Khushi is very intriguing. Her conversations with the dr and then her interaction with Arnav n NK is so well crafted it sends chills.
Aakash is wicked and Arnav is bad... Love him though!

Off to read intoxicated!!

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Posted: 05 November 2012 at 3:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by araina7

Originally posted by arisai

Originally posted by araina7

Hey rafa (since everyone calls you that I feel weird to call you 'arisai', I hope you don't mind me calling you that. I hope it's not just friends thing. LOL )
Ok, I have a small question. LOL
What's the name of the guy whom you have pictured as Arnav? He is effing HOT and I think I have seen him somewhere on tv or maybe movies but I just can't figure out where. May I know his name??? Please, pretty please!!!! Tongue Smile

It's no problem. Call me Rafa. 

Arisai seems like you calling me Madame. LOL Hahaha a friends only thing? Not at all. Wait- let's just fix it both ways- LET'S BE FRIENDS. Nice to meet you. #StillInFreshersMode

Jacey Elthalion. He's a pretty prolific model so you probably have seen him in many an ad campaign. 

Haha.  Oh yeah, Let's be friends Big smile Nice to meet you too. Myself , Araina (as if it was not obvious from my username lol) I'm having one of those phangurl moment when totally nerdy, unpopular girl in school gets friend request from popular and amazing girl from school. lol LOL

And yes, Thank you for the Hottie's name Embarrassed

Nice to meet you. I don't suppose you're on Twitter? Don't want to get a bollocking from the Mods for 'chatting'. Ahahaaa I'm really nothing special (as those who do know me on here will attest LOL). You're going to REGRET this friendship soon enough. ;)

He is an absolute babe. I was scouring for ages until I found him. Hahaa my cast is entirely based on looks. Except for Khushi who I switched with Berenice Marlohe. Because she is beautiful and I loved her in Skyfall. 

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Posted: 05 November 2012 at 4:42pm | IP Logged
I just read your work in one day... You are a very brave writer!! If I had tears by the of "milton" what we're you going through??

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Posted: 05 November 2012 at 10:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by arisai

Originally posted by araina7

Originally posted by arisai

Originally posted by araina7

Hey rafa (since everyone calls you that I feel weird to call you 'arisai', I hope you don't mind me calling you that. I hope it's not just friends thing. LOL )
Ok, I have a small question. LOL
What's the name of the guy whom you have pictured as Arnav? He is effing HOT and I think I have seen him somewhere on tv or maybe movies but I just can't figure out where. May I know his name??? Please, pretty please!!!! Tongue Smile

It's no problem. Call me Rafa. 

Arisai seems like you calling me Madame. LOL Hahaha a friends only thing? Not at all. Wait- let's just fix it both ways- LET'S BE FRIENDS. Nice to meet you. #StillInFreshersMode

Jacey Elthalion. He's a pretty prolific model so you probably have seen him in many an ad campaign. 

Haha.  Oh yeah, Let's be friends Big smile Nice to meet you too. Myself , Araina (as if it was not obvious from my username lol) I'm having one of those phangurl moment when totally nerdy, unpopular girl in school gets friend request from popular and amazing girl from school. lol LOL

And yes, Thank you for the Hottie's name Embarrassed

Nice to meet you. I don't suppose you're on Twitter? Don't want to get a bollocking from the Mods for 'chatting'. Ahahaaa I'm really nothing special (as those who do know me on here will attest LOL). You're going to REGRET this friendship soon enough. ;)

He is an absolute babe. I was scouring for ages until I found him. Hahaa my cast is entirely based on looks. Except for Khushi who I switched with Berenice Marlohe. Because she is beautiful and I loved her in Skyfall. 

Regret this friendship with you??? Nope, nada, that's never happening. I never gonna regret friendship with one of my favorite FF writer, I'm your "phangurl" yaara and I'm not sugar coating it SmileSmile
I love your writing like anything. "Cafe du soliel" makes me laugh like a retarded monkey all the time. "Tainted" has a different charm to it, its different and very intriguing. And I effing love "Deus" yet it makes me sooo envious of your Uni life coz my Uni sucks like anything LOLLOLLOL
I refrain myself from reading "Intoxicated" cause from what I read in the forum, it definitely is one of the best story available here but it has a tragic ending and tragic ending depresess me really bad. Basically, "it pinch ma hrt 2 d core" lmaoLOL
Oh yes, I have read "Soulmate" too. It's very cute Wink
I know you have written much more than these and I promise to read them when I find enough time Big smile
Do I sound like a stalker yet?? ROFLROFLROFL
haha I'm really scared of mods warning for making this a chatting zone. Lol. Yes, I'm on twitter. 
"Araina777" my twitter name, Follow me?? LOL What''s your twitter name, I will follow youEmbarrassed

P.S. I really want to watch Skyfall, but college is being bitch right now Angry
P.P.S. You sure do have a good taste in men and women both. Tainted casts are effing HOT Day Dreaming


Edited by araina7 - 05 November 2012 at 10:12pm

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Posted: 06 November 2012 at 4:19am | IP Logged
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Posted: 06 November 2012 at 4:27am | IP Logged
I watched Skyfall and did make a comparison to the fear Silva generated with the one Akash does.

So Khushi is going to be his new plaything?  Bernices terror was impact-full in the movie so looking forward to whats going to happen to our girl here.

Payals grief is so raw, really heartbreaking to read.

Absolutely love this story...   

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Posted: 06 November 2012 at 4:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by araina7


Regret this friendship with you??? Nope, nada, that's never happening. I never gonna regret friendship with one of my favorite FF writer, I'm your "phangurl" yaara and I'm not sugar coating it SmileSmile
I love your writing like anything. "Cafe du soliel" makes me laugh like a retarded monkey all the time. "Tainted" has a different charm to it, its different and very intriguing. And I effing love "Deus" yet it makes me sooo envious of your Uni life coz my Uni sucks like anything LOLLOLLOL
I refrain myself from reading "Intoxicated" cause from what I read in the forum, it definitely is one of the best story available here but it has a tragic ending and tragic ending depresess me really bad. Basically, "it pinch ma hrt 2 d core" lmaoLOL
Oh yes, I have read "Soulmate" too. It's very cute Wink
I know you have written much more than these and I promise to read them when I find enough time Big smile
Do I sound like a stalker yet?? ROFLROFLROFL
haha I'm really scared of mods warning for making this a chatting zone. Lol. Yes, I'm on twitter. 
"Araina777" my twitter name, Follow me?? LOL What''s your twitter name, I will follow youEmbarrassed

P.S. I really want to watch Skyfall, but college is being bitch right now Angry
P.P.S. You sure do have a good taste in men and women both. Tainted casts are effing HOT Day Dreaming

You will give me such a massive ego boost that my head will explode LOL

Hahaa I love Uni life so much. Keeps me ridiculously busy but I do love it. Thank you for enjoying my writing this much by the way. :) Haha Intoxicated? That's actually probably my favourite story of mine, I had it in my head all the time and wrote it while my A-Level exams were going on because I needed to get it out. I think I finished it in about two or three weeks. The ending isn't tragic, it's just open to interpretation- it felt perfect to me. But if you're a 'happy-endings' kinda person, Liya forced me to write a ridiculously sugary Epilogue to it which I REFUSED to post on IF because it wasn't MY ending. But it made a lot of people happy. LOL

My Twitter is in my Signature :) But just for convenience: iarisai  
Prepare to be greatly disillusioned.


P.S. IT'S INCREDIBLE.
P.P.S. Hahaa, well if I'm picking based on nothing but looks then they'd BETTER actually be attractive. 

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Posted: 06 November 2012 at 4:43am | IP Logged

I feel sad. Eff off everybody, I'm coming back later. For the first time in tainted history, I actually am gonna need a glass of wine to give you MY standard comment.

OMG RAFA! I met this chick who told me LOADS of stuff, and she was like this PERFECT mix of both Khushi and Payal!

Rafa, the similarity was creepy. No really, it was.

-V


Edited by V323 - 06 November 2012 at 5:15am

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