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medha16 IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 5:47am | IP Logged
wow!!!!that was indeed cruel n merciless...i shudder to think what must have been for payal to see her little innocent sons getting shot cruelly at the hands of a ruthless akash!
great update as usual!

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darkninja Senior Member
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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 7:15am | IP Logged
ok so Akash is pretty f**ked up god i wish i could just grab the gun out of his hand and shoot him dead
I cannot beleive that he just shot two innocent kids they had nothing to do with anything he's a freakin heartless monster

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oh.petite.one Goldie
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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 7:17am | IP Logged
i can't believe he did that Shocked

wonderfully written...

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Sur_10 Goldie
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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 8:25am | IP Logged
You were right about him doing an unforgivable act. There really is no way around this.
I really appreciate that you have managed to keep the story unpredictable to this point. The narration and the flashbacks are very gripping. 
Frankly speaking, the choice of cast is disappointing.

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flowers4u IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 8:40am | IP Logged
Wow what an update ...very heartbreaking ...omg akash has no soul ...continue soon...

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PastelBeauty IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 8:44am | IP Logged
OH MY FRIKKING GOD!! He's sick! To kill all those children!
Nicely written! Smile

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summaiyasayed IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 9:00am | IP Logged
nice updt
 
 
updt soon

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dingle Senior Member
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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 9:27am | IP Logged
I never ever would have predicted such a shocking twist :S

youre right, this action has made Akash un-redeemable. And it would have done something to damage Khushis psyche?  Bloody hell!

Brilliant story...  but traumatic chapter

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