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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 12:04am | IP Logged

Oh my God Rafa!

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 12:12am | IP Logged
Leave no loose ends .. Akash 's motto .. So y did he not kill khushi ??
Omg !! did K kill payal to stop the pain ??
Omg !! Am I thinking and over thinking this ??

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 12:24am | IP Logged
@arisai-I am sort of confused. There are two Akash's in the story right? The doctor and the goon. How do both of them have the same sirname? Akash Malik? That's strange. Pathetic move Akash. Killing two innocent children? It served the purpose well. Proved his supremacy. In a gross way. Cowardice? Ring a bell Akash. N.K is not the coward. The pathetic scum who shot two unarmed young kids in cold blood is a coward. A Sick one at that. Mentally and psychologically sick. Though the reliability of the entire situation depends on Khushi. And I always agreed with Khushi on one thing.She is like Lolita's father, an unrealiable narrator. Thank you for updating and thank you for the pm:)

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 12:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by blck234

@arisai-I am sort of confused. There are two Akash's in the story right? The doctor and the goon. How do both of them have the same sirname? Akash Malik? That's strange. Pathetic move Akash. Killing two innocent children? It served the purpose well. Proved his supremacy. In a gross way. Cowardice? Ring a bell Akash. N.K is not the coward. The pathetic scum who shot two unarmed young kids in cold blood is a coward. A Sick one at that. Mentally and psychologically sick. Though the reliability of the entire situation depends on Khushi. And I always agreed with Khushi on one thing.She is like Lolita's father, an unrealiable narrator. Thank you for updating and thank you for the pm:)

Aakash isn't the Doctor :') The Doctor's identity isn't going to come out until absolutely necessary. ;) 
He balances being the head of the Group with being a D.I.G- Playing both sides of the game. 

Even I can't redeem him. I've tried to ASK him in my head (yes I'm insane) for his justification and he has none. Because there isn't any.


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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 12:31am | IP Logged
Guise- if any of you see this- I'm going to try to reply to comments/ at the very least hit the Like button on them for this chapter because they're going into such depth.

But I will do this tomorrow when it is no longer the middle of the night and I have written my Physiology essay and done the MCQs. :)

THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH.

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 3:59am | IP Logged
What I love about your writing is the precision - there is never a single word thats out of place or unnecessary. And this update is a stunning example. 

Normally, because writers have the advantage of words, time seems to be stretched out during the events. In this case however, it almost feels like real time. And thats adds to the terror, the chill down your spine. Cold. Blood. 

Aakash is probably the only character in the story so far that seems to be pure evil. Are there any grays to him in future ? 

Oooh and Arnav wants to teach at midnight :D :D What wouldn't we give for those lessons :P 

I can't wait for the Khushi-Payal dynamic to unfold. I really want to see what leads to Khushi killing Payal. 

Great work! Oh, and I sent you a PM about 2 days back. Take a look when you have some time ??

Much love,

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 4:04am | IP Logged
Nice

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Posted: 28 October 2012 at 4:12am | IP Logged
I actually felt bad for Payal! No woman should EVER have to bear that! Thank you for making me want to kill Akash!

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