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russelskhushi IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 6:07am | IP Logged
whan r u updating??? its been quit a wile that u uploaded...

nomad.ness Goldie
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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 8:52pm | IP Logged
please update soon!
Can't wait to read the following revelations.
anaidama Groupbie
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Posted: 25 October 2012 at 9:56am | IP Logged
Its easier to write romcoms and thrillers. But its much tougher to write a tale of the black and grey side of the world. 

It is said, that to be a writer, one should be able to see things from various different perspective's. [Somebody said that ok? Please dont ask me who] For someone so young, assuming the age you have listed on your profile is correct, you have an amazing perspective to a lot of things. I wish I was you at age 18. 

There is a lot I want to comment on your characters. But, I will wait for the story to finish before I get all opinionated on then men and women of Tainted. 
arisai Goldie
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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 5:19pm | IP Logged

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Edited by arisai - 20 July 2013 at 12:25pm

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PersieV IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 5:32pm | IP Logged
OH GOD

I DON'T KNOW WHY BUT I JUST SEE AKASH SITTING ON A CHAIR RUFFLING A CAT AND THINKING HOW TO SHOW PEOPLE THEIR PLACE AND STATUS. 

And that's how his plan went. In his head he mentally thought let me KILL CHILDREN and show everyone how I have arrived

And that's what made him ruthless and everyone will hate him but to be honest I didn't hate him but now I loathe him. However I want to know what he will do now...

How Arnav will fit in...

Questions and questions


Edited by Aveiro - 28 October 2012 at 12:27pm
khusiarnav Goldie
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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 5:34pm | IP Logged
res
unres!!

What The f**k!!! He killed those innocent kids!!!! 
I am in shock!! Never expected this.. really!!!

I do not know what else to say!!

Edited

Oh MY f**king God... Arnav and Lav are HOT!! who would not kill for them...
Oh man I want Arnav...
All the cast are like super good looking and  pretty but Arnav and Lav are SEX BOMBS!!! Wink





Edited by khusiarnav - 28 October 2012 at 1:09pm

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araina7 Senior Member
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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 6:55pm | IP Logged
What the f**k!! What the f**k!! What the f**k!!! Why would you kill those innocent kids??? What a psychopathetic bas***d Akash is. f**k him. I feel like grabbing a gun n pulling off the trigger, one bullet through is f**ked up mind, and the other through his heart, though I'm pretty sure he doesn't have one. I'm still fuming with murderous rage. Angry Angry Angry
Edit:
I just saw the pics of the casts, Arnav is f**king hot, I want him so bad lol and Lavanya is sexyyy. All of them are good looking but Arnav and Lav's pic are exceptionally HOT.

Edited by araina7 - 27 October 2012 at 6:58pm

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AngelTeen IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 27 October 2012 at 7:36pm | IP Logged
That was not something one should read early in the morning.

He killed them?! And he did it in front of Arnav?! I just hope this wakes up the left up humanity in Arnav and he dies something! And now for a guess...Khushi killed Payal to rid her of this terrible incident? Payal may have asked Khushi to kill her?

Whatever be the answer, a very powerful chapter and I am glad you didn't prolong that scene.

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