Tainted (removed) - Page 70

Caught up with all the chapters..this is so dark and intense..surely not for faint hearts. I do admit that it took me a few chapters to get into the groove...i did hang in there only because your writing style is awesome and you have never disappointed me earlier..

The past and present Khushi is so strikingly different..owing to her bitter and terrible experiences the world had to offer..Arnav..am still trying to figure him out..i think he is not as bad as he portrays himself.. ;) As a pleasant surprise Shyam didn't seem repulsive but interesting and amiable..I felt for Aman and Lavanya stories..I thought Khusi despised Payal because she was his first love and she came in her love story's way..but surely Payal is Selfish with a Capital S. 

Thank you once again for the pms..

Khushi being an unreliable narrator like Lolitha's step father, it gave me the creeps. I could picturize Akash as the calm and collected psychiatrist. This story is so mysterious and yet alluring, it draws me in completely . I am not such a big fan of grey stuff, stories or life, but your story is amazing. One of the best characterizations I have seen in recent times. Khushi. She is so difficult to read. Waiting for this to continue:)

Can't wait to read the following revelations.

It is said, that to be a writer, one should be able to see things from various different perspective's. [Somebody said that ok? Please dont ask me who] For someone so young, assuming the age you have listed on your profile is correct, you have an amazing perspective to a lot of things. I wish I was you at age 18. 

There is a lot I want to comment on your characters. But, I will wait for the story to finish before I get all opinionated on then men and women of Tainted.