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Posted: 11 years ago
This chapter built up on the intrigue quotient. But I still fail to understand Khushi, her character is so complex.
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Posted: 11 years ago
This story is addictive, I keep wanting to know more! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: arisai

"It's a strange feeling, Doctor, when somebody commands you to do something. Even if it was something you don't particularly mind doing, when somebody tells you that you have to- you want to refuse just to piss them off."

"She ruined a lot of lives." Khushi said quietly, her voice suddenly devoid of any anger of annoyance, all the Doctor could hear was the faintest twinge of regret. "She was stupid, and incompetent, helpless and completely defenceless. But worst of all- she trusted the wrong people."

"And by the wrong people you mean?"

"Me. Doctor. She trusted me."

SCARRRYYY!!!!!!!  OMG, I love the psych memo you dropped in that conversation. Maybe that was always the case with Khushi. She knew what she was going to do and when someone told her to do the exact same thing, she flipped! And, can I say that its quite scary to read about how she loathes Payal. I wonder what she said or did to Khushi that triggered such an onslaught of mayhem and bloodshed. Khushi is as scary as the Ashley Patterson of Tell Me Your Dreams by Sidney Sheldon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Every time I read a chapter, I like this more.
Khushi is a very interesting character
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Posted: 11 years ago


lovely update
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
Short but interesting!!
Khushi seems both innocent & wicked...
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Posted: 11 years ago
I love this story-have I ever told you how much!??
Well I myself realized after seeing the pm...I was unusually vet happy 😆
great update!!!! So Shyam wants her to keep him away from other girls-interesting...
Payal's abused and wnt to Arnav...I can't wait for the next part???
I love the doctor!!!:D
Payal trusted khushi...id like to read about this...

Ps is Shyam really gay????!???!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I just started reading this story, read all eleven parts together and WOW, What a story! And the characters..so well fleshed out, not borrowed at all. Their relationships with each other are both intriguing and fascinating as more layers are uncovered. Waiting for the next update! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Really ur story is getting more dangerous for weak heart like me 🥱
Ok jokes apart it was awesome really this khushi is scaring me the core plz update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
this khushi is so complex but intriguing. hats off to you for this story! its one hell of a piece of writing