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Ok, so I'm 3rd one to comment... This will do for now... Coz this is big improvement from previous attempts...lol... Now, on to more important stuff...the update was eventful. And awesome... So Khushi killed Payal the dishwater... What happened to Arnav, NK, Aman, Shyam, etc. then?   *Tsk... Patience, HGL. Patience* And you internet-love me? Rofl... (i'm using my phone to comment right now, so can't use emoticons and my comment looks like a complete mess... Will properly edit when I'll be using my laptop)Edited by Happy-go-lucky - 11 years ago

wow i loved your update...finally a arshi scene ... now lets see khushi did trust NK a lot...hes a criminal like the others the psyciatrist was right how cud she?? then came lets take her to arnav...didnt nk know that these two share a bad past?? n if aman dear was downstairs cudnt nk take her to him...

I never been excited to read about how someone died, but man I am looking forward to how Payal is murdered. Love the song, it's a typical song that an entertainer like Kushi would dance to. I find these old songs more fun to watch being danced to than the newer item songs... : ) 

W*F!!

Awesome
So she killed payel great . I hate her .
Love khushis style of talking
Wht I'm waiting to know is who else she killed
Nk is her hero

So Khushi killed Payal!

Haha love the boring as dishwater description for Payal.

I wish this could be a novel and you could write much longer chapters so I can read it all at once. LOVED IT!

Fabulous update...

That was an intense update!!

Khushi killed Payal?!?! I'm so curious to know more...this FF is very intriguing

Sheer brilliance. Honestly. 👏Edited by MsIPKKNDManic - 11 years ago

Wow. That was just...amazing!

This Khushi is so snarky and so adept at black humour and really sometimes even I feel that she is a better psychoanalyst than the trained one but seriously the last line...woah!

Amazing writing and a plot more intriguing with each chapter because in the past Khushi is clearly besotted with NK and scared of Arnav but in the present, the equations seemed to have changed somewhere.