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Sona

@mistyrains

IF-Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

This story is so gripping and your writing is terrific.

I love the relationship, the understanding between NK and Khushi.

Also, Aakash, his description sounded eerie to me. Wonder why?

Though the whole mafia angle, seems to change the dynamics of the story.

The doctor, he has some stuff know? Somehow I find him to be very intriguing.

Loved the chapter and the quote :D

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damonzlady

@damonzlady

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

"The Boss

Deputy Inspector General of Police, Aakash Malik..."

i actually got goosebumps reading this line...

n before i forget... YAY! u finally updated. i'm seriously hooked on this FF cuz it it truly an amazing

one!luv it n luv d update!

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kritash

@kritash

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

really liked it.
fantastic and fabulous.
nice update.

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765911

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

well.. dat *time's up* is for us too...😭

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Akash is the boss! He seems to be a very dangerous man!

Well khushi trusts NK so blindly? i guess in the future she MIGHT regret trusting him.

Well the story was amazing! The car chase was thrilling! Good one Rafa! :)

Loved it!

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jazzpreet

@jazzpreet

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

wow i love the characterization you've given to akash in this FF! soo dark and shady. i loved this update! i find it kinda weird though, how khushi so quickly agreed to go on a drive with NK. she's only met him twice! lol reading this update really made me think that nk and khushi are a better couple than arnav and khushi. speaking of arnav, what is he up to?! will he be back in the next update?! gah, im dying to read the next chapter now!

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727154

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

Aakash the Boss - that was a good twist!😃
Such a gripping tale, who was the victim? So her faith in NK's goodness is going to be shaken soon? Hmmm waiting for the mysteries to unfold !

ps: the Doctor is Maamaji 🤣
Edited by preetihere - 11 years ago

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kriti_atharv

@kriti_atharv

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

awsuuum dear...loved it n thnx 4da pm...

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dumas

@dumas

IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

loved the update akash is not the doctor can't to find out who it is that will be the last mystery before the n loved the update thanks for the pm

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Ask me (;

@Hot.Pink.Heels

IF-Rockerz

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

So Akash is the big man behind all this?

Nice!

So who's the Doc then?

Great update! Continue soon :)

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