Tainted (removed) - Page 10

I finished reading the second chapter.

hey great two chapters and the story is very different im intrigued

Wow Arnav's a gangster...interesting...

i'm curious i want to know what's going on.

Wow.

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Edited by arisai - 10 years ago

Wow. That was fantastic! I am loving the NOT black or white part of this story! NK and Arnav and Khushi and Payal and Lavanya...you dont know much about any of them but you cant paint them as either black or white. NK clearly emerges as a favourite, as does Lavanya in a way but lets see because I can see Arnav turning over a new leaf - good or bad as it may be with NK being the catalyst but at least Arnav recognized the monstrous act he could have committed...and Khushi obviously did start to hold grudges or so the doctor thinks...brilliantly done!  Edited by AngelTeen - 11 years ago

Payal………

It's funny how an ornament saved Khushi, if we could use "saved" here? I am unable to place Arnav's character; he seems all too familiar, yet something deeply mysterious about him. I am talking about his persona rather than the mystery that surrounds the guy currently.

NK….. nice again, for a person dwelling in a dark world, he seemed to shine like a torch light.

I really, really like Lavanya in this story, she is edgy, driven and sexy not her appearance but her attitude.

ok wow! so arnav isn't that evil! even though he is pretty messed up!
what happened to the innocent naive khushi!? i feel sad!
gr8 update !
thnx for pm!

just read chapter 2 and 3 together.  You have a wonderful imagination and a talent for expressing it.  I have read several stories on this forum but none as captivating as yours.