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-Life and it's ways- FF - Chapter 28 (pg 49) (Page 46)

Futbol_queen Senior Member
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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 5:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by fia21

Every time I read an update, I can't help but say "OMG" . Superb Gurr. Loved every bit of it. Especially all the fight scenes you have been describing. I can actually visualize everything. And damn that psycho Akash is clever. Wonder who's behind Uday's kidnapping. I am sure it's Rajveer!

The Jackie Chan part was hilarious!

P.S: Don't know if you saw it, but I forgot to tell you that I had edited my previous comment on Page 44 long back!
Embarrassed You are too nice! I've the strange ability to write fighting sequences better than romantic sequences, its both a curs and a blessing *dramatic hand to the forehead* LOLLOL And yes! I did see your update comment thank you!


Edited by Futbol_queen - 16 November 2012 at 5:23pm

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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 5:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by pia.raha

woow u updated finally i am soo happy!!!!!!!!!!!Clapmanyata and uday learning karate were hilarious!!!!! oh ho akash ne to manyata aur vijay ko pakad liyaa,ab kya hogaa kya pata!!!!!!! hpefully udayy hi bache le sab ko!!!!!!!! will be watng for ur nxt updatee!!!!!!! and tum jaise bhilikho mujhe to mndblowwing hi lagta hai!!!!!!!!!!Smile
Thanks Pia! I WILL TRY MY VERY BEST TO UPDATE THIS QUICKLY! Hopefully...
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Posted: 16 November 2012 at 5:22pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...navina...

Awesome , amazing ...  thoroughly enjoyableClap.
 
Every scene was perfectly written ; so much so , that I could visualise everything Approve.   U made Akash a really strong villainConfused  ...   BUT THEN    ...   ALL PSYCHOS ARE  SUPPOSED TO BE LIKE THATLOLWink.  
 
Very excited about the next part   ...   CAN THE 3 CAPTIVES OVER-THROW THE EVIL "DEMON"   ????Evil Smile
 
Thanx for a superb updateSmile,
 ...   please continue soon Big smile!!!!
Thanks Navina, Akash isn't as strong as you guys think, even he has his weak spot Wink

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Posted: 23 November 2012 at 3:07pm | IP Logged
Hey!i was one ov de silent reader ov ur ff but ur story n writing skills provoked me to comment.i m damn xcitd to read it further plz plz plz update soon.n plz do add me in ur pm list plz plz:)

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 1:51am | IP Logged

Finally managed to read your  FF completely.. its marvelous and very entertaining.. you describe the scenes very beautifully.. J is such a sweety in this FF and its a nice change.. Pls update soon. waiting to read what happens next..Big smile

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
wow what an update!
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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 2:50pm | IP Logged
wow awesum luved it...

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Posted: 24 November 2012 at 5:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rsaakka

Hey!i was one ov de silent reader ov ur ff but ur story n writing skills provoked me to comment.i m damn xcitd to read it further plz plz plz update soon.n plz do add me in ur pm list plz plz:)
Big smile I'm glad you liked it that much! I'll send you a budy request do accept it!

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