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-Life and it's ways- FF - Chapter 28 (pg 49) (Page 20)

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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 8:31pm | IP Logged
PERFECTION! 

and it didnt feel short at all! 

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Posted: 13 August 2012 at 11:19pm | IP Logged
uday hrt is with m,dat was sooo romnticc line!!!!!!! then he teached her bow and arrow,i had goosebumps!!!!!!! m kissed udayy,hayeee!!!!!!!! lovelyly!!!!!!!!!!! update soon,and a long oneWink

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 2:24am | IP Logged
awesome and marvelous this is one of my favorite FF please update soon please this update was so nice i mean manyata stuck in the fire is so epic loved it please update soon and thanksBig smile for the pm 

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 6:17am | IP Logged
Great Update Gurr! The Fruit Fight was Hilarous ! I Can Imagine The Poor Uday Coverd With Fruits! Hmm So Both Of Them Are In Love ! That's Awsum! Ty 4 d pm & Update Sooon As I Want This Rajveer Chapter To Be Closed As Early As Possible :) 

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 11:05am | IP Logged
Another fantastic update Clap
Even though Rajveer is annoying the crap out of me, I can still overlook him because you give me such amazing ManVeer scenes to read. Manyata holding on to Uday the whole way back to their cabins was so cute. And Mr. Gill is hilarious LOL . My favorite part has got to be the one where Manyata accidentally tells Jay that Uday kissed her, and simultaneously on the other hand, Uday admits to Unnati that he's in love with Manyata. These were my favorite lines though:

Could Yuvraj Udayveer actually be in love? Yes, yes he could. His thoughts were once again interrupted by Unnati, "Dada! Answer my question!" Unnati whispered. "Yes!" Uday looked up at her and grinned. Unnati looked confused, "Yes what Dada?". "Yes, I'm in love!"

And obviously the rapid fire round too that Jay plays with Manyata to make her realize she's in love with Uday. That was brilliant. And awww Jayh was so adorable in this scene. Getting all excited. The whole Mister Grouchy Potato scene was epic. Lol. And I simply loved the entire arrow shooting scene, from Uday acting to have hurt his eye to bring Manyata closer to him, to the part where Uday is teaching Manyata to shoot the arrow while being all romantic Day Dreaming

"I think you should lay off the horror movies for a while, and besides, your aiming at the wrong place" Uday turned the arrow around so it faced her, "That's where my heart is" he winked.

This part made me go AWWW literally Embarrassed

"You know Princess, I have a headache, maybe you can give me more of your medicine? It'd be appreciated" he smirked.

At this part all I could say was "naughty Uday" Wink . And omg Jay was hilarious in this part:

"The twins have tried to kiss me at least five times"

ROFLROFL . The fruit fight between ManVeer was so funny LOL . And then there scene in the end in the cabin was so H-O-T Blushing . All the kisses in your FF are like so unexpected. Lol. But that makes these scenes all the more interesting.

"Trying to take off my clothes already, hmm?"

Oh man I love Uday LOL . And oh dear Manyata's stuck in the fire. Hopefully Uday will come to the rescue. I just can't wait to see the precap scene playing. It has got me so curious. So update soon please. I know you might want to kill me for saying that every time, lol, but seriously I can't wait to read it. Getting restless already Embarrassed . Once again, awesome update Gurr Smile

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
i loved it n manveer moments cant get ny hawter.thanku fr d upd8 plz upd8 soon.n wth was in dat file dat rajveeer is trying to show plz plz upd8 soonBig smile

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Posted: 14 August 2012 at 1:38pm | IP Logged
awseum yar!!

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Posted: 16 August 2012 at 10:36am | IP Logged
Morning! So I just came to say that Chapter 15 will be extra long, so I've decided to split it into two parts. I'm still writing it so I might post part 1 tomorrow...until then Ta-Ta bye-bye...

P.s. Prepare yoursleves for a big dhamaka! Smile

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