Originally posted by fia21
I am seriously your fan now!
You are honestly so amazing. And this FF
is like pure awesomeness literally. And 2 chapters in a row? Woah this
has got to be my lucky day
. Even after I was done reading two chapters in one go, I was still
tempted to read more. Man you have got me so hooked to your story.
both the chapters to bits. And I just HATE Rajveer. Why exactly does he
hate Manyata so much though? The whole bus scene was A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!
. Manyata teasing Uday by deliberately bringing Rajveer in every conversation is so much fun to read
. Especially Uday's reactions, he was so jealous. And when Manyata pulls his cheeks was so adorable
. Their entire conversation through text messages was brilliant. Loved
that part so much. It was so funny. And when Uday pulls Manyata back
while they are about to change buses was such a hot scene
. These lines were my favorite:
<div align="center">"Let go Uday!" she tried to wriggle out of his grip. "Nu-uh, Princess,
you're going to pay for what you did on the bus...one way or the other"
he smirked. Manyatha gulped, "Im sorry?"
Manyata is hilarious
. The part at the end of chapter 11 and start of chapter 12 was
oh-so-adorable where Manyata falls asleep on Uday's shoulder and Uday
dozes off leaning on her head too, and Jay and Unnati click their
picture in that position. So cute. I am loving the way you are showing
how comfortable Manyata feels with Uday. She doesn't mind sleeping on
his shoulder or being close to him in public and isn't always shy around
him. Chapter 12 is again really amazing. The whole going camping/hiking
idea is fantastic. Oh man you cracked me up at the parts where Uday is
getting all pissed at Mr. Gill for not treating them like Royals.
Especially this line:
<div align="center"> "How can he be so blunt! We're royals we could shut down his business!" Uday muttered
. Sushant and Dilip are too freaking adorable and the perfect cupids
for ManVeer, especially when the villain Rajveer is on the lose. Did I
mention I freaking loathe him? Manyata patting Uday's cheeks, then Uday
carrying Manyata in his arms all the way up the cliff...so romantic. The
entire cliff scene with ManVeer was again really beautiful. Just loving
their unexplainable bond. And omg they're lost, yaaayyy
. Haha people must be wondering why I would be happy at such a thing like people getting lost
. Lol. But when it comes to ManVeer, getting lost means lot's of romance, am I right?
. I hope I am. And awww Dilip and Sushant are so sweet, they stayed
behind for them. Uday and Manyata's banter in the end was so funny. Lol.
Precap seems interesting. Can't wait to read the whole thing. So please
please please update soon or I might seriously die of curiosity. Lol.
It's really hard for me to choose a favorite part from both the
chapters. but I still couldn't help mentioning some
. Once again, mind blowing updates!
P.S: Can I know your name?
Trust me the next chapter is ready, ill update tomorrow! And trust me you won't be dissapointed!
P.S. you can call me Gurr