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ArShaAngels IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 9:16am | IP Logged
Amazing upodate cookie nd aroma.kria took poision.
Oh god  y did she do this.
i was crying reading the update.Cry
Nice to see Kria trusting Vish.Smile
It was superb duperb one and the wauy Vish reacted agree she had her griveriences...
really really emotional updte ...Clap
luved it...Star


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Posted: 26 July 2012 at 11:00am | IP Logged

Hey cookie n aroma amazing story guys

 

(sorry m commenting so late...*kan pakde*maaf kardo*plzzz*)

 

loved it to the core

 

awesomeee writing skills...really gr8

 

loved the way u described her last day's works..

.

(i was really scared to hear that it was her last day..somewhere i knew she's

gonna die in this story...)

 

 

"i gave him a tight slap"

 

oh wowww..i wish aisa sach mein ho d3 mein...

 

loved everything from her entry in college..firing vp,meeting her friends

slapping shivam, dance challenge vodka shots...each n every thing...just

awesomeeely  written

 

"i switch off all light of my house because today i want to stay in  darkness i

noe u guyz noe dat m scared of darkness... "i speak to it  will u b my friend" ...

nd m waiting for response from this darkness ... nd guess what he said yes ...

today m no more scared  from dark ."

 

wonderful lines mahn...totally loved it...super amazing

 

then that letter...omggg superb imagination

 

sh*t i was hell scared what was in that locker...

 

vish is really a true friend...adore their friendship here...

 

it does'nt matters him dat she lives or die''''''''''

 

HOW can HE tell this...she is the LOVE of his life...dint like it!!

 

Seeing the photo they all went numb nt uttering a single word frm their mouths

. rey nd swayum did'nt respond at all they standing there lifeless as if their

souls were snatched away frm them unwantedly '''.

 

(I was really crying reading this part...hell u guys made me cry...but nicely

written...)

 

ten years has passed bt they did not know where is rey

 

omggg...cant even see him like this...

 

 he said- this is my punishment for not believe in love . main apne aap ko

khatam nahi kar sakta is liye i kill my self daily .. nd i think this my punishment

love u always my BATCUTTER

 

CryCryCry*cry*cry*cry*CryCryCry

 

lastly before i forget...Fabulous Title!!

 

U r really amazing writers..

 

thanx for the pm

 

-kinjal

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Posted: 27 July 2012 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by --Kinjal--

Hey cookie n aroma amazing story guys

 

(sorry m commenting so late...*kan pakde*maaf kardo*plzzz*)

 

loved it to the core

 

awesomeee writing skills...really gr8

 

loved the way u described her last day's works..

.

(i was really scared to hear that it was her last day..somewhere i knew she's

gonna die in this story...)

 

 

"i gave him a tight slap"

 

oh wowww..i wish aisa sach mein ho d3 mein...

 

loved everything from her entry in college..firing vp,meeting her friends

slapping shivam, dance challenge vodka shots...each n every thing...just

awesomeeely  written

 

"i switch off all light of my house because today i want to stay in  darkness i

noe u guyz noe dat m scared of darkness... "i speak to it  will u b my friend" ...

nd m waiting for response from this darkness ... nd guess what he said yes ...

today m no more scared  from dark ."

 

wonderful lines mahn...totally loved it...super amazing

 

then that letter...omggg superb imagination

 

sh*t i was hell scared what was in that locker...

 

vish is really a true friend...adore their friendship here...

 

it does'nt matters him dat she lives or die''''''''''

 

HOW can HE tell this...she is the LOVE of his life...dint like it!!

 

Seeing the photo they all went numb nt uttering a single word frm their mouths

. rey nd swayum did'nt respond at all they standing there lifeless as if their

souls were snatched away frm them unwantedly '''.

 

(I was really crying reading this part...hell u guys made me cry...but nicely

written...)

 

ten years has passed bt they did not know where is rey

 

omggg...cant even see him like this...

 

 he said- this is my punishment for not believe in love . main apne aap ko

khatam nahi kar sakta is liye i kill my self daily .. nd i think this my punishment

love u always my BATCUTTER

 

CryCryCry*cry*cry*cry*CryCryCry

 

lastly before i forget...Fabulous Title!!

 

U r really amazing writers..

 

thanx for the pm

 

-kinjal

hey my frontier mail thanks for this lovely comment 
nd missing u so much 
love u
come back soon

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Posted: 30 July 2012 at 7:57am | IP Logged
It was a touching OS...just another remnder that our life is so filled with so many things which we hardly get a second chance at..& when we realize the time is already up Smile

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Posts: 8565

Posted: 31 July 2012 at 2:23am | IP Logged
sob sob sob
it ws a v v sad update..i cudnt help bt cry!!

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Posted: 03 August 2012 at 2:05pm | IP Logged
hey aroma and cookie ur this os all 3 part hav brought a tear from my eyes it was heartouching update the way u both describe the update the way kria leaved her 24 hrs life was really making me cry while dying also she smile and went it was awesome guys pata nahi tha aroma aur cookie itna senti update bhi lik sakte hai u both r great loved ur update till core u both r amazing

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Posts: 7267

Posted: 21 November 2012 at 4:13am | IP Logged
Awww nyc but sad ending...CryCryCryCry

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Joined: 18 September 2012
Posts: 21

Posted: 04 December 2012 at 11:57am | IP Logged
you made my hell state is was crying really badly... Cry
but really loved it it express true love dosti in short dil dosti n dance...Thumbs Up

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