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Flame.Of.Rose IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 12:20pm | IP Logged

Edited by aditi061 - 22 July 2012 at 12:32pm

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Black_Stone IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 12:21pm | IP Logged
hey guyz m back wit the updte 
this one's a combine work of me nd aroma 
thank u guyz fr appreciating our works your comments were really encouraging us 
okk no more of my bak-2 
this is the last part guys 
here u go with the update

After kriya left Da College, vishakha excused herself and went away
She removed da letter and started reading it
Dear vish,
Haws u???
Must be super fine na
U must be thinking dat wat was I doing in college, y did I slap shivam y didn't I talk to anyone??u must be having lot of questions in ur mind so apne dimaag ko zyada zor mat do letter k ending mein dere's a no. nd address go der nd take da things frm dat locker nd haan pls watch
Dnt keep thinking y I gav dis letter to u nd not rey or swayum or neha coz u r da only one who trusts me rest all r angry nd thus dey won't do wat I say nd throw dis letter
After dis, I don't think we vil b able to tlk or meet u or anyone else 
Thank u vishakha fr being sch a gud friend of mine
Luv u loads
Wish u all da happiness in lyf
Please baaki sabka bhi khayal rakhna especially rey nd swayum
Address- rosewood society
               Plot no. 22
              Bandra west
Locker no 54732 (random no.)
                                                                      kriya :-)
After  readin da letter was confused as to wat did kriya has written in it nd y did she gav a locker no. nd where da hell is she goin ???? y cnt dey meet agn , this was frustrating her evn
Mre  so she decided she has to go der nd find out wat kriya meant
she rushed frm to the college to address given to her by kriya .
She  did not infrm anyone ,evrybdy saw her rushing out of the college dey tried to call her bt she didn't pick up their calls ,all were worried nd decided to ask her tomorrow wen she returns frm college
Its been a week after dat day bt still no signs of vishakha she's nt picking their calls nor they knew where is she ??? all were really worried for her
Rey also came to noe dat kriya had cum to the college nd wat she did
Bt he said dat he does'nt care bout her anymore , she's dead fr him nd it does'nt matters him dat she lives or die'''''''''' nd all kept bad mouthing about her
They cursed her a lott
The next day vishakha came to the college for sum work, she did'nt meet anyone in the college
Neha saw her goin in the office .
She informed everyone about vishakha in the college .
All came near the office nd heard about her leaving the college, all were hell shocked after she came out she did'nt evn once glanced at them nd carried on her way she looked sad, her eyes nd nose were swollen as if she had cried a lott
This shocked the rest of them evn more as vishakha was one of the strongest grl dey ever knew
She would never cry until da reason is really big .
They kept on asking her da reason fr leaving the college, where was she frm past one week, y is she behaving lyk this, y is she looking so down and upset nd so on''
She could not take those questions more so she shouted at them dis shut them up nd she left frm there with tears falling frm her eyes.
She left frm there nd went to her house .
All were confused there standing there being upset as they did nt see vishakha crying anytime  nd here she left crying nd she's leaving college made dem evn more sad all were on a verge of crying bt they wanted to know the reason y is she leaving so they rushed to her house before its too late
.At Vishakha's house
There some kind of pooja was goin on .
It was almost over wend a gang reached there they saw vishakha crying bitterly near a photo .
Seeing the photo they all went numb nt uttering a single word frm their mouths . rey nd swayum did'nt respond at all they standing there lifeless as if their souls were snatched away frm them unwantedly '''.
Suddenly Sharon gained courage nd put her hand on vishakha's shoulder
It was then she realized about the gang being present there
She asked them too leave as there was nthing to do with them
Bt da gang they wanted to know wat happened '''''''..
After a lott of pleading vishakha agreed to tell them
She strted wit the day kriya came to the college , den she gave a letter to vishakha which in she had given a address nd a locker no. whn she reached there she found a diary nd a C.D
She read the diary nd da C.D also
Kriya had written everything in her diary frm the day she entered ST. LOUIS till she left
She had also written her reason for leaving nd breaking rey's heart
After she hadn't written anything
Den on the last page she had written "MY LAST 24 HOURS"
She had written about her whole, her coming to the college, firing VP, slapping shivam , listening to her friends curses, den her dance challenge she won, having vodka shots''''''.
End of the diary
Then they proceeded towards the C.D
Vishakha played the C.D on her laptop
All were in tears now, they were ashamed of their selves now
In this C.D. kriya had left a message for vishakha
Here goes the message
Imagine its  kriya sayin all this on a C.D
In this C.D kriya is smiling nd crying bth
Jab tk tumhe yeh C.D milegi I wnt be there around
Sooo I want to confess something to u
I guess ab tk tumne meri diary padh li hogi
Aahh dnt u cry now I noe bahut emotional cheezein likhi hai usme
Bt no more cries I want u'll to be happy
Fr breaking ur trust
Especially rey I broke his heart nd trust both
Sorry rey I did'nt mean to do that I noe I was really mean to u bt I had orelse u wuld be stuck at one place, I dnt care whether m hurt or no for me all matters is u
Sorry swayum,
Ur my best friend and I did'nt tell u anything
M really really sorry I didn't want to hurt anyone bt I guess I hurted everyone a lott more
Than I thought
Bt I was helpless
My mom was hurt and I couldn't deny her there
So I left without telling anyone
M relle sorry guyz
Bt I cnt take it anymore
I left my house, my mom evything nd came here
I cnt take it anymore
M goin far frm ur lives, vil never come back
Hopefully u'll vil forget me nd move- on
I guess almost u must have forgotten me
Please never be sad nd always smile
  Luv u guys
Really sorry
Miss u'll (with tears rolling down)
Oohh yaa I frgt m cumin to the college to sum work hope to see u'll there
Today is my most precious day "MY LAST 24 HOURS " (with a smile nd tears )
Jab tak tum logon yeh sab pataa chalega I'll be star high up in the sky
Toh main aap sabko roz dekh paungi cool na'''
Okk guyz chalo meko ready hona hai
Dey saw kriya she was all dressed fr college nd den she took something added in her juice, took her groups pic said sorry guyz , I luv u rey miss nd she left.
After dat vishakha said" isse dekhne k baad I rushed to kriya's house to meet her when I reached I saw'''"
 She started crying, neha consoled her nd she continued " I saw kriya was lyinjg on the bed DEAD"  she culd nt speak more . Neha kepy consoling her. She was speaking in between her sobs, " I called the doctor , they examined her nd tld dat she had consumed poison which reacted after 24 hours (guyz aisa kch nai hota hai, jst an imagination) nd declared she was DEAD
Now all were crying like hell bt now it was they were late , very late , she was gone , gone from their lives , forever never to come back . Rey, swayum, neha, Sharon, nilesh , Vicky , simmin, rinni, bharat , amar all they were ashamed of their selves for being sch a bad friend, they thought they did  not deserve her friendship , they were the world's worst friend they cursed themselves
Swayum was jst sitting helpless cursing himself for not understanding his best friend
"Rey " he was now crying like hell starring at her pic he was a body without a soul
Suddenly vishakha stood up, nd angrily said " guyz ab tum logon ko pataa chal gaya na
Now u may leave frm here aur waise bhi main India chodke jaa rahi hun hamesha k liye nd now I don't want to see ur faces nd she ran into her room crying . After that day vishakha also left from India and never came back, they did not see her agn .

after ten years sittin in his bedroom nd crying with a pic nd a letter  in his hand 
the guy was none other than rey 
yes after kriya's death he was just a body , without a soul 
 like sun without light 
heart without beat 
stars without shine 
dark clouds without train. 
rey left everything after kriya's death 
he started to live a lonely life , no one knew where he is , ten years has passed 
bt they did not know where is rey 
he was working without heart 
Its mid- nite and the same day when kriya died .he's laying on his bed nd starring out of the window at the stars he had no more tears left in his eyes now, even his tears betrayed him after crying for ears 
before dozzing off, he said- this is my punishment for not believe in love . main apne aap ko khatam nahi kar sakta is liye i kill my self daily .. nd i think this my punishment love u always my BATCUTTER

*phew* m tired now 
hope u lyuk it 
plz hit hit the lyk tab nd comment plz
now me bhaging yahan se bahut galiyaan milne waali hai aur jhutas chappals woh alag se
sooo bye 
- cookie and aroma Big smile

Edited by cookie_arsha - 22 July 2012 at 12:45pm

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Flame.Of.Rose IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 12:22pm | IP Logged
no prob dear! and vahan se thanks hata varna tu pitegi!
comment baad mai!

Edited by aditi061 - 22 July 2012 at 12:42pm

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
resBig smile

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Flame.Of.Rose IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
good girl!

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Black_Stone IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aditi061

good girl!
thnk u 
thnk uLOL

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puja_arsha IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
Awesome update...
Loved it...
Kria dead...nooo...
Vishakha hates all of dem...
Rey a dead body...
Swayam also d same. ..
Itna saddy saddt update...
It was emotional...

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-FrozenRain- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 22 July 2012 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
Amazing upodate cookie nd aroma.kria took poision.

Oh god  y did she do this.
i was crying reading the update.
Nice to see Kria trusting Vish.
It was superb duperb one and the wauy Vish reacted agree she had her griveriences..

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