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MG SS:The Dark Angel Of Fate **new thread added** (Page 58)

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THE DARK ANGEL OF FATE ...!!



PART 8


Maan : dadi par uss ke ghar wale kyun uss ki job ke bare kuch nahi jante ….4get about job who tou yeh bhi nahi jante ke geet mumbai mien hai …kyun ..?
Kyun geet apni family ke saath itni coldly behave kar rahi thi …kyun brij uss ke saath itna harsh tha ….
Aur sab se ajeeb baat ….aapke aur aniee ke saath uski bonding …
Dadi I am highly confused …akhir kya rishta hai geet ka aniee aur aap se ….aur kyun mien geet ko nahi jaanta jabke who aniee ke itne close hai …



Dadi Maa : maan bete relax ..hum jante hain geet ke bare mien buhat se sawaal hain jo aap ke dimag mien janam le rahe hain ….
Yahi waja thi ke hum geet ke bare mien aap se wahan jane se pehle hi baat karna chahte thay par mauqa nahi mila ….

Maan : dadi mujhe kuch samaj nahi aaraha ….ek larki jo aniee ke ……aapke itne close hai par mien ussko janta tak nahi aisa kaise hu sakta hai dadi …

Dadi : Aapke har sawaal ka jawaab hum dienge …par aap shanti se humari poori baat sunne ge ….
Closing her eyes for a moment gathering all the courage …dadi maa started …

Maan Iss kahani ki shuru-aat aaj ya kal se nahi huyi …balke tab huyi thi jab aap 5 saal ke thay aur geet ka uss hi saal janam huya tha …

Aaj se 20 saal pehle ….aapke maa aur dad Yash aur Preeti Khurana ke best friend aur geet ke parents

Mohinder aur Rano Handa …delhi aaye thay ..kyun ke hoshyarpur mien ziada opportunities nahi thi aur mohinder apna herited business nahi join karna chahte thay iss hi liye …..Yahan ek chota sa karobaar shoro karke …apni ek khushaal zindagi shoro ki …buhat khush thay dono apni nanhi si geet ke saath ..

A big smile instantly came on dadi's face…remembering the time when preetie first time entered in KM holding little geet in her hand n dadi did the aarti …

Par un se bhi ziada khush aapke maa aur dad thay …

Aapke janam ke baad doctors ne keh diya tha ke preeti ke dobara maa banne ke chances buhat kam hain ..

Par geet ke janam par yash aur preeti utne hi khush thay jitna ke Mohinder aur Rano …… khush thay apne best friends ke liye …preeti geet ko apni beti maan'ne lagi …rano ka ziada tar waqt KM mien hi guzarta tha … aur geet humesha se hi preeti ke saath khush raha karti thi ….yash bhi buhat pyaar kiya karte thay geet ko ek beti ki kami geet ne unki life mien poori kardi thi jab tak office se aake ek baar geet ko godh mien nahi lete thay unke dil ko sakoon nahi milta tha …. Dono ki jaan basti thi geet mien ..

Listening to all this maan was confused trying to remember all this but ..nothing came to his mind …

Then dadi Caressing maan's hairs lovingly with a sweet smile …….continued 

Rano bhi aap se buhat pyaar karti thi …aur aap bhi tou rano ke saath din bhar poore ghar mien masti karte rehte thay …kabhi ek shataani tou kabhi kisi dosre servant ko tang karna …rano din bhar aapke peeche khana lekar bhagti raha karti thi aur preeti geet ke saath raha karti thi …koi keh hi nahi skta tha ke geet preetie ki beti nahi ..aur apko aur rano ko saath dekh kar tou log aksar rano ko aapki maa samjh lete thay …

Maan was still trying hard to remember any of it …but failed ..n dadi continued lost in the memories of the blissful days ..

Geet 3 saal ki thi jab humein pata chala ke preetie phir se maa banne wali hain ..

Tear trail formed in her eyes ….remembering the way Yash lifted up Preetie in his arm in front of all family when she told him …



While maan looked amused …seeing his dadi soo happy with just remembering all that …but again he wasn't able to remember any of it …

Humara ghar khushyoon se phir mehek utha …aniee ke aate hi preetie aur yash ki zindagi mien ek naya rang aagya tha …par phir bhi geet ke liye unke dill mien jo jaga thi wooh waise hi rahi …

Yaad hai humien ek baar geet ko bukhaar aaya tha …aur yash itne pareeshan hugaye thay ke aniee ko humare paas chor kar aadhi raat mohinder ke ghar geet ko dekhne chale gaye … aur aapke exam ke result aate hi rano ne preetie se pehle aapko gale se laga liya …

Zindagi ne bin mange hi khushiyoon se daman bhar diya tha ..

Par tab hi pata chala ke Mohinder ke chotte bhai Raghav ne kuch saal pehle  HP mien Palavi se shaddi karli aur unka 4 saal ka ek beta tha jis ke bare mien tab tak koi nahi jaanta tha …jab pata chala tou ghar waloon ne unhe ghar se nikaal diya … Mohinder aur rano geet ko preetie ke paas chor kar HP gaye aur wahan sab se baat ki …aur phir tab se Raghav aur Palavi yahan delhi mien unke saath hi rehne lage ….

Aap ..Aniee …Tej aur Geet ek saath bare hone lage ……choti choti khushyan se humara ghar bhar gaya ..aur aap ki aur geet ki lariyan ..bachpan ki nok jhok hum sab ki zindagi ka hissa bangayi ... aniee bhi apne nanhe kadmo se sab ke dil mien utar gayi aur geet ki parchai ki tarha uss ke saath rehne lagi ...

Maan now able to sketch soe blur images in his mind remembering some fudged images flashing in front of his eyes but the head ache was now also starting making him restless … but he remained calmed determined to listen it all today ..n asked dadi to continue ..



2 saal palak jhapakte hi guzar gaye ….

5 saal baad ab ja kar Mohinder ka business acha chal raha tha …aur KC bhi tarakki ke aasmaan par tha …

Aap ko geet ko aur preetie aur rano k dekh kar Koi keh hi sakta tha ke kuan kis ka biological child hai …

maan was still stressing his memory to remember anything ...but nothing else than some faint blur images was thr ..standing in front of the window seeing the lawn he could figure out those blur picture of kids running in a lawn ..now he knew whose blur images were of his ..geet ..aniee tej ...n… HIM …

Par humare bachoon ki khushi ko kisi ki nazar lag gayi thi …KC ki taraqee Yash ki zindagi ki buhat si problem ki shuruaat ban gayi aur rivals ne buhat barh gaye ..

Dadi moved forward standing in front of Yash's pic that was hanged on her room's wall caressed it while maan was now able to understand that those blur images of that time in his mind ..his dad being stressed n mom along with aniee taking care of him …n some blur figures of another lady was Rano …

While dadi continued in tears …chocking in b/w ..

Mohinder aur rano … Raghav aur Palavi geet ke saath HP gaye sab se millne …..bas 2 din mien wapis aane wale thay ….Sab theek huraha tha buhat khush thay sab itne waqt baad HP jaa kar …

 par achanak mohinder aur rano ke accident ki news mili ..

Geet ne 5 saal ki age mien apni aankhoon se apne hi maa papaji ki mauth dekhi …uss accident ne pal bhar mien hum sab ki zindagi badal di …

Maan was shocked beyond words to know all this …n next he saw dadi sobbing hard n he went towards dadi placing his hand on her shoulder made her sit on the bed n gave her a glass of water …

Maan : dadi plss aap relax karo ..hum iss sab ke baare mien baad mien baat karte hain …aap araam karein abhi …

Dadi Maa : nahi maan aaj aapka saari batien jaan-na zarori hai …
Geet ko jaan ne ke liye …uss ko samajhne ke liye aapka jaan na zarori hai beta ..yeh sab kuch itna asaan nhi hai ...aur ...aur geet iss waqt aapki zarorat hai maan ...

After sometime dadi continued ..

Rab ki meher huyi aur Raghav Palavi aur Geet us waqt gari mien nahi thay ….par humari phool si bachi jis ne kabhi kisi ke zor se bolne tak ki aawaz nahi sunni thi ….uss ne apni maa ki jalti huyi body dekhi …papaji ki siskiyan sunni ….
Apni aankhoon ke saamne apne maa-papaji ki maut dekhne ke baad geet bilkul numb hogayi thi …na kuch bol rahi thi na kuch kha rahi thi …ek aansoo tak nahi gira uss bachi ki ankh se …jaise ek pathar ki moorat ban gayi hu meri bachi ...

Dadi maa started choking in between her wrds but composed herself knowing thr is a lot left to be revealed …

Preetie aur yash mohinder aur rano ke aakri safar ka hissa banne HP gaye tou geet ki halat unn se dekhi nahi gayi aur wohh geet ko apne saath le aaye …hum ne geet ke darji se baat kar ke geet ki parvarish ki zimedaari apne upar lee li ...aur geet yahan KM mien ek baar phir aagayi ...

while maan was blank yet again ...didn't remember any of it ..but somehow now he was able to relate to geet's behaiviour ...but still the question remained un-answered ..why she is soo rude to her own family even if she didn't lived with them ...still they were her chacha n chachi y she was soo cold towards every one thr ….n the most important thing y he never knew anything about geet …if she was such a essential part of his parent's life then y no one told him about her anything …Y .. 
but choose to be quite wanting to know it all clear n then he looked 2wards dadi to continue ...

Yahan aakar bhi geet ki halat mien sudhaar nahi hua aur phir kayi dinno tak preetie aur yash ne kushish ki geet ko normal karne ki buhat se doctors se baat ki magar koi faida nahi hua …magar iss sab mien aap apni maa ko miss kar rahe thay …after all rano ke rehte kabhi aapko preetie ki kami huyi hi nahi thi ..par bachpan ki wohh insecurities aap mien bhi aane lagi thi …aur iss hi sab ke chalet aap ne geet ko satana shoro kiya …

pehle tou yash aur preetie ne aapko dant diya magar phir kuch dinno baad hum ne geet ko bhi aisa hi karta dekha jab preetie aapko break fast kar wa rhi thi aur geet ne aapke Break.Fast mien pani gira diya …wohh pehli baar tha jab geet ne kisi baat par react kiya ..doctor ka kehna tha ke geet in-secure hai shayad iss liye ke rano ki tarha preetie bhi ussko chor ke chali jayegi …
Waqt guzarta gaya aur aapki aur geet ki chotti chotti larayion ne geet ko normal kardiya aur phir ek din school mien pata nhi kiya huya …aur tab se hi geet aur aap buhat ache dost bangaye ...aap dono ne kabhi kisi ko nhi bataya ke achanak yeh badlaw kaise huya ...aksar Yash aur preetie aap ko aur geet ko cheera bhi karte thay ek dosri ki tarafdaari karne par ...magar aap dono bas apni hi dhun mien thay ..

a slight chuckle left from dadi ...making a confused maan even more confused ...

par phir bhi aap dono laraiyan tou tab bhi waisi ki waisi hi thi ..
maan was amazed to know this side of his life ..while dadi was all the while smiling remembering the way these 2 use to irritate each other ..trouble each other than finally apologizing ...the sweetness of thr childhood that made her home fill with soo much of happiness ...

Geet ka 6th aur aapka 11th  b,day tha …magar aap dono hi Rano ko miss kar rahe thay …aur kisi ne kuch bhi celebrate nhi kiya ..pehli baar aisa huya tha ke humare ghar mien bachoon ka janam din na manaya gaya hu ...

Preetie aur yash bhi apne friends ko miss kar rahe thay saloon tak KM mien tehwaroon ka rang phikka raha Rano aur Mohinder ke bina magar fir wohi rang aap ne aur geet ne bhar diya tha uss diwali par …aapki aur geet ki zid par Yash buhat saari crackers lee aaye thay aur ek baar phir KM khushiyoon se roshan hugaya ...

Humein laga jaise sab theek hugaya …dukhoon ki woh par-chayii abb hat gayi ..magar hum galat thay ..waqt ke aur bhi tufaan aur bhi imtehaan baqi thay ..

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so this was half of the past hope i have satisfied u all with it ..
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i know i have again ended it on a wrong point but kya karoon iss ke aage ka part complete nhi tha .. 

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yeh SS abhi tak padha nahi hai...bt i think i will read it before update next part...so maine meri first place res kar liWink
 
 
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bas itna sa past hi itna painful hai wondr agye kay hau hoga
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awesome update
painful past..

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geet lost her parents in tender age..poor girl..

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