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MG SS:The Dark Angel Of Fate **new thread added** (Page 49)

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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
Hi thanks 4 da pm n intense update! Maan hears everything n slaps Brij! Maan leaves! Geet mimurs tht Maan still has nt changed! Brij tells Darji his version of wat happened! |Ragahav drunk! MAan thinkin abt Geet! Well written! update soon

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Posted: 21 October 2012 at 2:47pm | IP Logged

Fabulous update

Loved it dear

Continue soon

Waiting for more

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Fabulous update

Loved it dear

Continue soon

Waiting for moreSmile

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Posted: 22 October 2012 at 6:22am | IP Logged
Awesome update

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Posted: 23 October 2012 at 2:55am | IP Logged
part 6
nice part...
this Brij i so hate that rascal...
poor Geet...
but Maan's slap was too good...
cont soon dear...

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Posted: 24 October 2012 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
amazing update...
brij is so cheap...

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 8:50am | IP Logged


hi friends ..
me back ..with my dark angel ..Big smile


thnxx to each n every person for thr support liking n appreciation ...it means alot truly n honestly it motivates alot ..

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thnk u soo much ...

n here yet again the same thing which i told u in the last update as well ..Smile

people dont get confused with the character behaving here n the CS ..
coz CS what they r pretending n throught dialogue you can understand thr intentions ..
all i can say is Handa House is not what is seems o be ...

many of u are eager to know the reason behind geet's behaviour ..n r getting confused not getting her POV
to all of them people this story is a real nail biting one ...n i really can't spill the beans like that it will spoil the story so plss be patient ill be giving you all a healthy part of geet's past in next 2 parts i guess then all will be clear enough for u to understand Geet's POV ..

till then i hope u will bear his enigmatic dark angel of mine ...


posting next part ...
is thr any1 ...?? 

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Posted: 26 October 2012 at 9:12am | IP Logged

Plzz read the Above post ...



The Dark Angel Of Fate ..!!

PART 7

Darji : agar yeh shaddi hujaye tou sab theek hujayega ..fir na geet se humien koi khatra na humare khandaan ki izzat ko …
 
On The Other Hand …in KM

Maan reached his room …he layed flat on his bed ..tired with the hell schedule of the whole day …
But sleep was no where in his eye …instead ….. numerous questions …n a pair of eyes were flashing in his mind …

no YT ..here is another link 
song from the hindi movie EVIL RETURNS ..Apnaa Mujhe Tu Laga ...



MUSIC ..

Maan ( ST) : yeh sab kya hu raha hai ….jab se mene geet ko dekha hai ..mien kyun uske khayaloon se bahar nahi aa paraha …
Ek paheli hoo tum geet…mene jaise tumhain mumbai mien dekha aur jo tum aaj thi … pehli baar mien kisi insaan ko samajh nahi paa raha ….pehli baar life mien MSK kisi insaan ko lekar itna confuse hai …
Aniee aur dadi maa ke saath tumhara bond …aur dosri taraf brij aur apne hi parivaar ki taraf tumhara cold behaiviour …tum kya hoo …kuan hoo …
Wooh jo mene tumhain mumbai mien paya …wooh jo tumhari batoon ne mujhe smajhne par majboor kiya ..wooh jo mene tumhain aniee aur dadi ke saath dekha …ya who jo brij ke saamne tum thi …..


Aakhir kya hai tumhara asli roop …..kuan ho tum geet aur kyun sirf  2 din mien tum ne mere dill dimag aesa asar kiya hai ke mien chah kar bhi tumhare ilawa kuch aur nahi soch pa raha …ya phir yeh rishta iss se bhi poorana hai ..kyun mien tumhain apne wajood ka hissa mehsoos kar raha hoon ..kahin tum bhi bhi tou meri zindagi ke uss waqt se nahi joori jise mein bhool chukka hoon …

Anjaane ho tum jo
Begane ho tum jo
Pehchaane lagte hai kyun

Kya hai jo tum sab se chupaa rahi hoo geet …..aur kyun mien tumhari aankhoon mien wohh dard dekh sakta hoon jise tum apni hassi …apne ghusse …apni batoon ke peeche chupa rahi hoo ..
Kyun tumhari aankhein mujhe angel ki yaad dela rahi hain ….meri Angel ki …jo mere liye iss dunya mien sab se alag hai …shayad mere sab se kareeb bhi …sirf 14-15 saal ki thi who jab mien uss se mela …par usski batien itni hi gehri thi jitni tumhari aankhien …. 
Abb tak tou who bilkul badal gayi hogi …dunya ki iss bher mien patana nahi kahan kho gayi hugayi …uss ne mujhe mere saare sawaalon ka jawaab bas pal bhar mien hi de diya tha …aur phir dunya ki iss bheer mien khoo gayi thi ….mene aaj tak uss ka chehra sirf uss paper par hi imagine kiya hai …tou phir kyun jab bhi mien tum se mela mujhe angel ka khayaal aaya …kyun tumhari aankien mujhe angel ki yaad dela deti hain …KYUN …

Tum ghehri neendon mein
Jab soye soye ho
Toh mujh mein jagte ho kyun

Fed Up of his own mind ..which was torturing him with soo many question he decided to practice tai-chi to cool down his mind …n went towards the gym ..



Kicking n punching on the punching bag hard n harder …just to diminish the image of geet n her hazel brown eyes ….which were making him restless …
Every moment with her was flashing in front of him …making him practise even more difficult tricks …

Kya tujhse hai vasta
Kya tujh mein dhoondon
Main kya tujhse chaahu main
Kya kya hai tujh mein mera

The first time he saw her on the beach …
Second when she was saving a child from his car ..
Then how she entered in the interview hall …how confident she was ..

He got lost in the moment when the moment came in front of him when he saw her dressed in indian …looking so simple yet beautiful …remembering each n every encounter with her …the moments flashing in front of his eyes …remembering the pain he saw in her eyes …

Jaanu na main, tujh mein mera
Kissa hai kya
Par ajnabi apna mujhe tu laga

His eyes got blood red when he thought of brij trying to hit her n he broke the wooden table placed at a distance …

He was confused with her behaiviour ..frustrated coz his mind is not at all giving up thinking about her n raising numerous questions …restless coz of her eyes n his feeling of belongingness which he felt with her ….

The flashes of her painful smile …n her tears with aniee n dadi maa came in front of his eyes …n he broke another ice slab …with the moment she came in his embrace ..sweeping him in another world …making him lost in the look n innocence of her eyes …the nave look she hold in her ..the riddles she has created about her self …

Aankhon ne aankhon se kahi, dastaan
Tumko bana ke rajuda
Baahon mein jannat aa rahi, khushnuma
Tum jo hue ho mehrabaan
Jism se jism ka
Yun utaruf hua
Ho gaye hum sanam
Rooh tak aashna

Its been hours since he is practicing in the gym ….

N then dadi maa came thr …n the voice of her  foot step put a halt on his thoughts …

Dadi Maa : maan its past 12 at night …aap itni raat ko yahan kya kar rahe hain ..

Maan : dadi maa kuch nahi mujhe need nahi aarahi thi that's y …par aap abhi tak kyun jag rahi hain …plss aap jake soo jaye its not good for ur health to be up for so late …

Dadi Maa : maan bete jab bache pareshaan hoon tou maa baap ko neend nahi aaya karti ..
Hum itna tou jaante hi hain aapko ke aap kisi pareshaani mien hain apni dadi maa ko bhi nahi batain ge aap ..



Maan ( st ) : iss tarha sochte rehne ka koi faida nahi jab tak mujhe mere sawaloon ke jawaab nahi melien ge yeh larki aur iss ki mysterious life mujhe aesa hi pareshaan karti rahe gi aur agar mujhe apne sawaaloon ke jawaab chahiye tou sirf dadi hi hain jo mujhe geet ke bare mien bata sakti hain …air agar geet mere past ka hissa thi tou dadi ko zaror pata huga ..

Giving a lot of reasons to his mind to obey his heart …he was still in a delima whether to ask this to dadi maa or not ..then come up to a final decision consoling reasoning his heart and mind to do what his hearts want ….

Maan(st) : After all jis larki se meri life ki do sab se important persons itna attached hain mujhe usske baare mien jaankari hona zarori hai …aur waise bhi geet ko reject karne ke liye mujhe reason bhi chahiye tou iss ke liye bhi mera geet ke bare mien jaana zarori hai ..

Dadi Maa : maan kahan khoo gaye aap ..?? bataye na bete kya hua …aap dinner se bhi aise hi aagaye thay aur ab yahan aise bolye bete …??

Giving all the reason for his restlessness which he was feeling from the evening after meeting geet …he decided to ask dadi about geet n seek his questions answer ……

Maan : umm …han dadi who actually mujhe aapse geet ke bare mien kuch baat karni hai ..??

Dadi Maa : baat tou hum bhi aapse karna chate hain geet ke bare mien wahan jaane se pehle hi karna chahte thay par …chorye pehle aap jaiye aur change lar lejeye ..phir humare room mien araam se baat karte hain ..

On The Other Hand ..in Handa House ..

Geet was sitting lost holding a frame in her hands …looking at the stars in the black sky ..n then staring the frame with a tear trail on the edge of her eyes she said in a pain filled cracking voice …

Geet : yeh sab kya hu raha hai …aap tou sab janti hain na ….par mien kaise dadi maa ko samjhaoo …kaise aniee ko kahoon ke nahi kar sakti yeh shaddi ….nahi ban sakti usski bhabi … mene sirf aniee ke liye London chora …apne dost wohh log jo sach mien mujhe pyaar karte thay ..sab ko chor kar yahan aagayi …ek aesi dunya mien jahan pyaar ek dikhawe se ziada aur kuch nahi hai …

Aap tou jaanti hain na maa ..mien kitna darr gayi thi …uss insaan ne mere best frndzz ko mujh se alag kar diya …..un ko ek dosre se door kar diya …mujhe poori tarha se tor diya …uss ne kaha tha who sab ko barbaad kar dega ..agar wooh aniee ko bhi nuksaan pohchani ki kushish karta tou …mien kya karti …kaise bachati aniee ko …

kaise poora karti app se kiya hua apna wada …mien apne dodno dostoon aur humari dosti ko nahi bacha paayi magar aniee …mien usko kuch nahi hona dena chahti …agar uss ko pata chala tou …nahi aniee tou aaj bhi bilkul bachi hai wohh iss dunya ki yeh sachaai nahi samajh payi gi ..

Aap hi btao abb kya karoon mien …Aap hi tou hain iss dunya mien jo sab jaanti hain …dadi maa tou aaj bhi unn 2 dino ki poori sachai nahi janti iss hi liye meri shaddi maan se kar wana chahti hain …
Plss meri madad karo maa …plss mujhe kuch samaj nahi aaraha …
mien kaise aapke bete se shaddi karloon ...kaise maa ..



Aap ne humesha mere sawaalon ke jawaab deye hain ..plss aaj bhi meri madad karye ..mujhe rasta dekhaye …mujhe rasta dekhayi ..

Geet : kya mujhe maan ko saari sachai batani chahiye …?? Wohh samjheinge kya ..
Yahan par sab jo kuch plan kar rahe hain …pata nahi kya huga agar maan ko inn sab ki sachai pata chali tou …agar unhoon ne inn sab ki sachaai dadi maa ko batayi tou …

Saying so geet closed her eyes …releasing the the long held tear trail … she was remembering all the incidents took place b/w her n maan from the moment she came in front of his car …till the last time he went away from Handa House …

Ik zara jo chale
Do kadam saath mein
Mil gaya hai hume
Zindagi ka pata
Jaanu na main tujh mein mera
Kissa hai kya
Par ajnabi apnaa mujhe tu lagaa
Jaanu na main tujhse mera
Rista hai kya
Par ajnabi apnaa mujhe tu lagaa

lost in the memories of past she rested her head back on the bed rim …

Here after changing maan went to dadi's room …walking with a lost face ..hia mind still thinking all the events that took place in last 2 days …

Jaanu na main tujhse mera
Rista hai kya
Par ajnabi apnaa mujhe tu lagaa

Dadi Maa : aaiye maan bethye ..

Maan ….feeling un-comfortable ..confused how to start the convo …he was sitting in front of dadi …

Reading his mind dadi maa started the convo ..

Dadi Maa : maan aaj pehli baar aapne khud kisi baare mien hum se baat karne ke liye kaha hai bete ….bataye na kaisi lagi geet aapko ..




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so here it is another update for DARK ANGEL ..
hope u liked the song selection ..

finally we r heading 2wards the main story NOW ..Embarrassed
phewww it was a difficult one to drag the story till here ...Dead
next part will start the FLASHBACK PAST ..Big smile

finally u all will get ur answers ...LOL

plzzz hit like button n leave ur precious comments with ur review over this one ...
will me improve it n to know if i conveyed the correct emotions ..
plzz avoid the grammatical mistakes ..


waiting for ur reviews ...


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