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MG SS:The Dark Angel Of Fate **new thread added** (Page 46)

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The Dark Angel Of Fate ...!!

PART 6 

Walking at a fast pace he saw geet standing in front of him N suddenly he lost his balance n falls on geet making her loose her balance '.swinging around in each others embrace.'

She was about to fall on the ground but suddenly felt two strong arms enveloping her 'securing her from hitting the hard ground ..

Mahi ve '..Mahi ''. Mahi ve ''



She was having her eyes closed with the fear of falling '.while maan was lost in her simplicity 'he was staring at her face endlessly 'observing every curve of her face 'her natural beauty '.there was nothing artificial about her 'her fearful face was looking soo innocent 'the single strand of her hair resting on her face '

Her eyes '.omg her eyes 'the moment she opened them ..he was again surrounded with the feeling of belongingness 'don't know y but he always find some kind of attachment with the pain he is seeing in her eyes 'like it's a part of him she is carrying with her '

Lost in his own trance he made her stand 'without removing his hands from his waist .. he was stairing straight in to her eyes 'like trying to read them ..trying to reason the pain he always witness in her eyes '

But soon his trance got broken with the un-comfortable look in her eyes 'which was due to their proximity 'he realized n moved away taking 2 steps backward ..

Maan ( hesitant with what he did ) : ummm 'who ..actually I was engrossed in something n didn't saw u '

Geet : its okiee 'wooh sab log aapka dinner par wait kar rahe hain ..

Maan ( avoinding her gaze ) : umm ya okiee ..

Geet : dinning room hall ki left side par hai '

Maan went away in the guided direction skipping the ackward situation '. While geet was about to move but was stopped by a fuming Brij ..
Who grabbed her elbow n dragged her out of the main door entrance '

Outside house ..
 
Brij is scolding geet because he thinks geet delibrately embraced maan '


Brij : laaj haya sab widesh mien chor kar aagayi hai tou ..pehle kya kam mou kala kiya hai jo aur bhi kuch baqi hai ..aur kya kara tune maan ki coffee ke sath bol abhi 'kuch aur nahi mila tou ab tu ne maan ke saamne bhi ''.

Geet ( frustrated with conti. Accusation ) : mien aapko pehle bhi keh chukii hoon mene kuch nahi kiya 'maan ka peir fisal gaya tha iss liye hi wohh sab '

Brij ( grabbing her hand quite harshly ) : geet ek baat tou kaan khool ke sun le 'agar ab ki baar tune humare khandan ke naam ke saath koi bhi khilwaar karne ki kushish ki tu mien bhool jaoonga ke tou meri behen hai aur phir tujhe mujh se savitri devi bhi nahi bacha paayi gi aur na hi tera who Tej bhai '..Samjhi tu '.!!!

Geet ( in a dead cold voice ) : aapko safai dena mere liye na tou kal zarori tha 'aur na aaj hai ..Kyun ke na aap ne kal meri baat mani thi aur na aaj maan-ne wale hoo ..
Aur rahi baat beehen bhai ke rishtey ki 'tou aap jaisa jaanwar kisi ka bhai tou kya insaan keh lane ke layak bhi nahi hai .,..jo karna hai karloo 'mien wahi karoon gi jo mujhe karna hai 'waise bhi iss ghar mien kaun kya hai yeh mien buhat ache se jaanti hoon '

Brij ( roared with cheer anger ) : GEET '!!!!!!!!!

Brij raised his hands to slap her but was stopped by someone instead got a tight slap right on his face making his lips to bleed '



next he saw a strong manly structure with blood red eyes in anger standing in front of geet 'blocking his way to even see her '

Maan : larkiyoon par haath utha kar apni mardangi sabit karna 'tum jaise na-mard ka hi shauq hu sakta hai 'par brij handa yeh tumhara hoshyarpur nahi hai jahan tum kuch bhi karoo ge aur koi kuch nahi kahe ga ''
Geet par haath uthane ke bare mien sochna bhi mat 'aur dobara yeh galti karne se pehle iss thapar ko zaror yaad kar lena 'kyunke mien dosri baar apni baat repeat nahi karta samjhe tum ..!!

Brij was about to justify in front of maan but then Palavi came from inside '.

Palavi : geet brij 'tum dono yahan 'maan bete aap 'aapko tou koi important kaam tha na office mien jo aap jaldi jaa rahe thay '

Maan : ji aunty bas wooh mien ja hi raha tha 'sorry mien dinner par nahi ruk saka 'Namaste

Shooting another deadly glare to brij he left from handa haveli due to some emergency in KC ..

While geet stood thr staring at his retreating figure 'n murmured under her breath with a slight smile barely audible ..


Geet : bilkul nahi badle aap 'aaj bhi ghussa naak par ..

As if man heard it 'he turned around to see her one last time but till hen Geet had aleady  turned with a slight smile 'inside handa house along with palavi '



Dadi n aniee left from thr after having the dinner n some other talks with geet n her family '
Dadi even apologized for maan's departure like that ..
N aniee instructed geet to be ready 2morrow bye 11pm n she will come to pick her n they will go for a day out '

After dadi n aniee left darji ..palavi ..brij sat in the hall while geet retired to her soon after they left n locked herself in her room '

In Hall

Palavi : kya lagta hai aapko bauji ..maan han kahenge geet ke liye 'dadi ne jis tarha se kaha ke who apna faisla ek doo din mein bata deinge aur jese maan yahan se jaldi mien chale gaye mujhe ziada umeed nahi hai '

Darji : hmm ..theek keh rahi hoo '.maan ke bartao ko dekh kar laga nahi ke wooh shaddi ke liye han kahe ga ..

Brij : wooh kehne wala hota tab bhi geet ki harkat ne usska faisla badal diya huga ..

Darji : kyun ab kya kara geet ne ..

Then brij explained all about the maaneet fall incident in his own style '

Darji : mujhe samajh nahi aata yeh larki kyun humare khandaan ka naam badnaam karne par lagi hai '

Palavi ; zaror kuch galat-fehmi hai 'gudya aesi nahi hai ..mien baat karoon gi uss se subha ..

Palavi was leaving from thr when the door bell rung 'n she went towards the door to open it knowing who it must be ..

The moment palavi opened the door the person standing on the door lost his balance n palavi saved him from falling '

Palavi ( giving support to him walking 2wards the bedroom) : Raghav kitni sharaab pee hai aaapne ..aaj kal aapki ye drinking ki aadat kuch ziada hi barh rahi hai ..

Raghav : arre meri jaan business parties mien sab client ke saath pee li thori aur tum tou jaanti hoo jab khubsoorat larkiyan apne haath se wine ka glass dien tou mana karke unka dil torna acha nahi lagta mujhe ..

Raghav Handa ( geet's chachu running handa industries at a small frame but holds a lot of respect in society due to the relations with Savitri Devi ...loves Palavi n Tej the most in this whole world but quite a flirt type business man... he considers geet to be his responsibility after his elder brother n Bhabi's death ...he was a beloved brother of geet's parents ...n got the custody of geet after their death )

Palavi : ek party  mien nahi gayi aapke saath tou ye haal bana liya ..

Raghav : waise I missed u 'un mien se koi tumhare comparision ki nahi thi '

While darji was eyeing them both with disgust '

Darji : ek bete bahu ko shehar ( city ) bheja tou unhoon ne apni jaan khoo di ..
Dosre bete bahu ne yahan aake apni sanskaar khoo diya 'aur ab pooti humare ghar ki izzat neelaam karne par lagi hai '.

Brij : aap fiqar mat karoo darji 'bare chacha chachi ko hum nahi bacha sake 'aur chotte chacha chachi ko samjhana na-mumkin hai par mien geet ko kuch aesa nahi karne doon ga jo humare har ki izzat ko kharaab kare 'mera vaada hai ..iss baar uss kol** ko koi nahi bacha paaye ga mujh se '

Darji : agar yeh shaddi hujaye tou sab theek hujayega ..fir na geet se humien koi khatra na humare khandaan ki izzat ko '
 
On The Other Hand 'in KM

Maan reached his room 'he layed flat on his bed ..tired with the hell schedule of the whole day '
But sleep was no where in his eye 'instead '.. numerous questions 'n a pair of eyes were flashing in his mind '

Maan ( ST) : yeh sab kya hu raha hai '.jab se mene geet ko dekha hai ..mien kyun uske khayaloon se bahar nahi aa paraha '
Ek paheli hoo tum geet'mene jaise tumhain mumbai mien dekha aur jo tum aaj thi ' pehli baar mien kisi insaan ko samajh nahi paa raha '.pehli baar life mien MSK kisi insaan ko lekar itna confuse hai '
Aniee aur dadi maa ke saath tumhara bond 'aur dosri taraf brij aur apne hi parivaar ki taraf tumhara cold behaiviour 'tum kya hoo 'kuan hoo '
Wooh jo mene tumhain mumbai mien paya 'wooh jo tumhari batoon ne mujhe smajhne par majboor kiya ..wooh jo mene tumhain aniee aur dadi ke saath dekha 'ya who jo brij ke saamne tum thi '..
Aakhir kya hai tumhara asli roop '..

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so here is was ..i know another confusing one ..Tongue
but chill in next 2 update all will be quite clear with dadi revealing the past ...n this is ur teaser/precap as well ...

hope u all liked my narration ..
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Edited by sobia4maaneet - 25 December 2012 at 2:00am

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Posted: 20 October 2012 at 10:25am | IP Logged
awesome update..

Edited by dona86 - 20 October 2012 at 10:39am

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Posted: 20 October 2012 at 10:31am | IP Logged
Awesome part dear

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Posted: 20 October 2012 at 10:38am | IP Logged
nice part...
good wirk maan...brij ko aur deni thi...
now tej kaha hai????
so dadi will reveal geets past...m waiting for it... hope she will reveal in front of maan

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Posted: 20 October 2012 at 10:45am | IP Logged
awesome update dear 
so geet remembered who maan is 
and now as ur net is alright kya humhey update milega jaldi jaldiWink

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Posted: 20 October 2012 at 10:55am | IP Logged
superb update
i liked Maan stopping brij

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awesome

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AWESOME,MIND BLOWING UPDATE

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